So cute, I like it a lot!

Cute, this sounds realistically how a very shy girl would behaved. As far as I can tell (I'm a guy who's awkward around girls) I remember that I tried to get this pairing, but by the time I figured out how to get supports, I was on, like, Chapter 16, and I wasn't able to get the final support before I beat the game somehow.

This was a really cute story, I loved it. It wasn't super long but it was a bit longer and more satisfying than some of your other stories, which I enjoyed. As for being out of character, I thought that Hector was not as abrupt as he is in supports from the game, but it works fine because it is a love story.

Good for you for writing good, clean fics. I am so happy that I can read a romance and don't have to worry about content being innapropriate. thx!

I thought this was a sweet story. I especially liked the fact that it didn't end in the traditional "I love you" and "I love you too" spiel. Oh, and I agree, proms are scary.

Oh look, someone who wants concrit! (ie: Constructive criticism)

Yeah, a lot of people get annoyed when I give them concrit. Mostly because they don't like flaws being pointed out. Glad you won't mind. Not that I'll find anything, but hey, ya never know.

Oh... here, have some help with the fanfic lingo... even though this is old.

Fluff- sappy romance, or something really cute.

Drabble- a short introspective piece, usually. A drabble is less than 500 words long, and can really be about anything. Romance and angst/tragedy are the most common ones you find. Short detailed stuffs.

Poor Florina. to be honest, I'm rather the same way when it comes to social gatherings of any sort. A bunch of coworkers tried to convince me to be their designated driver for a trip to a bar for dinner and hanging out next week, but I told them HECK NO. I might be sociable at work, but that doesn't mean that places like that wouldn't make me uncomfortable. I'd be so nervous I'd be sick to my stomach.

(Of course, I went to a coworker's wedding reception, and they are trying to use that against me. I was uptight and not comfortable at all the entire time, but I also had a friend from work there with me.)

Goodness. I know what that's like. I hate hate hate it when I'm with someone in a place I'm uncomfortable in, and they disappear. Is that social anxiety? I think it is, though I'm not really sure. My luck, though, I wouldn't have run into a man, I'd have run into a wall, or a pole, or a pillar...in front of everyone. Hahahaha!

I was scared of a guy I work with when I started working in the factory I work in, but after I realized he was actually pretty nice, I fell for him hard. It's been almost 3 years since I've been working there, and there's no way anything's gonna happen between us, but sometimes I'm a little scared to talk to him, now. He's just one of those people, I guess. I feel like I can relate to Florina in a manner of speaking. Poor gal.

I can't believe she just dashed off like that. Hehe.

This was actually pretty good. I never went to my prom. I wasn't allowed, but I was terrified anyway, so I had a good excuse. Haha! My two best friends skipped it with me and we watched anime and played hide-and-seek in the dark and everything. Ah, I miss those days. ;_;

Hector was in character for sure. Florina was a LITTLE off, mostly when she stopped stuttering for a bit without an explanation. It could have used a little more introspective on either of their parts, but other than that, it was great.

Keep up the good work.

Cheers,

Ciao,

-Manna

I really can find no fault in this, it was beautifully written and you deftly potrayed the characters' personality. Hector-nor Lyn-wasn;t out of character so rest assured. I look forward in reading some more of your works in the near future.

Frog: I LOVE this story! It's so cute. I love this pairing too! And I don't think Hector at least was out of character. But then again, I'm not too picky about that. And I don't think the dancing was too short either. It was very romantic and sweet. You didn't need to add any more. Bye.

I loved this story! It's so great! I've been looking for really good HectorXFlorina fics, and I found one! This one! Great job! I loved it!

Yaah, this was so cute!

I really enjoyed it. I do not think it was too out of character at all. You should definately write more.

Wildwerewolf:NICE! LOVE IT!

Nice. Very good. I enjoyed it a lot! Keep up the good work!

Hiyas! - This is very romantic, I'm proud of you. You've got a real talent for descriptions. Loved it!

I noticed Lyn was a little out of character; normally I wouldn't have mentioned this, but you specifically asked, so . . .

Anyway, this isn't my favourite pairing, but it's still a good pairing. And I really like what you've done with this story; the description of Florina as a wallflower worked really well. Florina was perfectly in character, and you stretched the dance scene out nicely- a dance scene is hard to string out. I know; I've tried. Anyway, this is a really nice fic.

Well, I haven't really read any other H/F, so I can't say if it's a "typical" fic or not.

But I must say it's absolutely brilliant. Seriously. Definitely one of the best things I've read in a while. Great job.