Ha! Florina drunk was quite funny! I must commend you, it's hard to write a drunk person. Or at least it seems to be after seeing so many people fail on this site

You do realize that Sain just raped Florina, right? And that Florina is being forced into a relationship with a man who doesn't love her and won't be faithful to her, meaning she's going to be miserable, right? Just kidding. You obviously don't, since you were clueless enough to put this under "romance" and "humor."

Love this! More!

I want to like this fic. It's well written, mostly; the part where Sain speaks to Florina the morning after is the only part that needs work (between "wait up a second" and "how did you get a guy", it's a little hard to tell what's going on; you don't say that it's the net day, and Farina comes out of nowhere, having forgotten about her flask). So it's pretty good overall.

But while others may enjoy this, I'm kind of horrified. What Sain's doing here is rape; there's no other way to put it. The fact that Florina doesn't remember and Farina's closing comments make it even worse. Florina's almost certainly a virgin, and now that she's lost it unwillingly, it's going to turn her world upside-down. This is what makes me unable to enjoy this fic; although it's fairly good, I just can't like it.

I want you to know that I'm not trying to be mean here, and I certainly don't want you to take offense at this. If you could make this a little less demeaning to Florina, I wouldn't complain about it at all.

Well, this fic gets my stamp of approval too- a pretty decent fic!

A good opening but I hope you're working on changes to.

Haha, nice. Farina would be one to keep alcohol with her.

It's funny, though there's no way a drunk person can be... that bad, but hey, it's funny

Like I said before it kicked ass, really funny and you pulled off the perverted yet still honourable Sain perfectly

Sain: Bravo! A thousand cheers for you and me!

Nightmare: Um...like I said really good, I'm off to Sain proof my things

HAHA!

Although I seriously doubt that ANYTHING could get Florina that rediculously drunk, that was one heck of a kick to read. I liked the title a lot too. Fit the story to a T.

Later,

Rex

Hm...

I like the aspect of it all. Really, I do.

Farina seemed just a bit Out-of-Character. I do not think that she would just let Florina "waltz" around drunk and in stupor. Most people would at least be worried for their siblings should a similar problem arise.

All in all, since this is for a C2, I'm not complaining. Much.

Very nice.

J

hmm...interesting! me like!

Aw man, I was planning to do a chapter where Florina got drunk...

Still, this is great. Sain's a little more perverted here than you usually portray him, but I loved the idea of it. Farina at the end was especially funny. :)

~Lemurian-Girl~

Kilroy: Oh... My... God...

Lyn: What?

Kilroy: RLnaruhina finally posted something new...

Lute: WHAT! WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME SOONER! WE MUST PREPARE FOR RAGNAROK! APOCALYPSE IS NIGH!

Zero: What's wrong with Lute?

Lyn: RLnaruhina updated.

Zero: REALLY! I better go get the giant repelent.

Kilroy: Don't forget the winter coats. Fimbulvetr is coming soon.

Lyn: Will you stop it with the Ragnarok references!

Kilroy: Sorry...

Zero: Ahh... but it's fun...

Kilroy: So, do you plan on continueing this, or are you finally going to update something else?

Lute: You're one to talk. You haven't updated in months.

Zero: Shutup. I like things the way they are now.

Kilroy: Okay, update something soon. Kilroy out!

Ha, told you I'd be the first to review...Your getting better, not that I have any right to say so. And now its the ending of the "Sain does the peg knight" trilogy. Good job, and now, start working on Triblade, or more changes.