Oh, VERY nice. I really enjoyed this. Well done.

Paula is a WHORE! Just saying.

dude i love this, it gives awesome insight to paula's character :)

This was gorgeously done! I loved every moment of it. Great job!

That was brilliant! And I dont even like Paula.

that was pretty good! i dont like paula that much but it's interesting to see things from her view.

Absolutely incredible. Great use of dialogue, I can really hear the characters, which is rare in a Gorillaz fanfic, and the story runs along at a cracking pace.

You've brought Paula to life. I love the way you've written her fling with Murdoc as a pre-emptive strike, to make sure Murdoc suffered from kicking her out of the band. So many writers treat her as a one dimensional slut, and it's refreshing to see her written as a human being.

I hope you write some more Gorillaz fanfic. :-)

A diamond in the rough among many crappy self insert fics. First reasonable fic from Paula's point of view I've ever read. Great job!

OMG so so good! You really brought out Paula's character well!

Dude...whoa...im impressed...thats like really good. good work dude (clicks on favorites)

That was pretty good; I actually felt bad for Paula in the end. Could've been a bit longer, though. I think you should have expanded the Paula/Murdoc part, and I don't necessarily mean the toilet scene; possibly the part before that to show the growing sexual tension.

Very nice. Good job. :) I'm adding this to my favorites.

Wow...that definitly rocked! This is going into my favorites. I can't believe this was the work of a first time story! Its...amazing! Everything!

-TSSC

Now usually i don't do Paula2D, but this was really good. I love the style of writing and you did an excellent job with the Brit. accent

Keep up the amazing work,

~Bow~