| Reviews for Mistaken |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2017 Omg i loved this. It is awesomeness you write awesome |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2017 I liked this. Not to mushy or fluffy that others makes me gag. So now I've got a wider perspective on how the other jounins are when they're not on duty ~ gossiping! Thanks for this! |
 Amrun chapter 1 . 4/9/2013 I really liked how rough their foreplay was and how subtle the difference between "play" and "play" was. Thanks for sharing. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2012 One of the best one shots I have read on here in a long time! realy funny an so cute! |
| Matsu Meiana chapter 1 . 4/5/2011 I just loved how you used Anko. *lol* |
| eBooeBoo chapter 1 . 9/16/2010 FANTASTICALLY written story! What a marvelous little jewel you have here! The writing style was smooth, the characterization on the dot, the imagination, wit, and (absolutely amazing) chemistry was incredible to behold, and the whole structure of this piece was organized but still loose enough to let in its personal literary swagger. Great grammar as well, by the way ;) I mean what more can I say? This fic just made my day! I've read a lot of KakaSaku out there, including SilverShine's, and none of them are even in the same league as hers. For the first time ever, I will have to say that yours is in the same league. Not comparing writing styles, mind you (because styles are incomparable), but the vivid imagery that you use are remarkably like hers. What makes you stand out on your own however, is indeed your own writing style, which is superb. Gah, I can't go gaga enough over this. I've almost filtered through this site's entire database of KakaSakus and finding this is like finding an incredibly refreshing oasis in a desert of horridly dehydrating fics. The only lament I have is that I feel slighted in the length of this fic. I really, sorely wish this had been longer. But eh I can't complain when I just found an incredibly brilliant fic :) |
| Naide13 chapter 1 . 8/3/2009 loved it...sequel please |
| darkchocol8807 chapter 1 . 10/27/2008 this is cute! DarkC |
| hello heartbreak chapter 1 . 6/6/2007 Very nicely portrayed. The length was perfect, and the characterization is very good. |
| astroea chapter 1 . 3/29/2007 tihi :) |
| YourAngelStandingBy chapter 1 . 3/26/2007 I like it when play, becomes Play, which then becomes PLAY. Yes indeed... -Angel |
| JustWriter2 chapter 1 . 2/27/2007 Kawii! -JWchan - |
| angel-tears-16 chapter 1 . 2/12/2007 Cute, very cute. |
| amber chapter 1 . 8/21/2006 you should add another chapter |
| 20FacesChizu chapter 1 . 8/12/2006 I laughed SO HARD at that ending. XD I will be laughing for weeks to come, I promise you. XD |
