I like what you have written so far. I am very surprised that you took what seemed to be a really impossible scenerio and used it to your advantage to come up with a well-thought out plot and storyline. I'm not going to lie and say that I didn't enjoy the sex scenes between Jack and Dylan (personally, I give you kudos for it. XD) and the witty sarcasm that Dylan presents (personally, more kudos for that). I personally love Dylan's character. She's very much what I was expecting in an OC. I love the story altogether. Keep writing and I hope that music school isn't giving you too much of a hard time. Believe me, as a recent graduate from college with a BA in english, I know how tough it is. Keep going at it strong and don't give up at your dreams.

-JO

I must say that I really love your story!

It has the just right amount of angst and funny and romance *cough I love Jack cough*

You really need to update though... I need to read some more of your story... like I REALLY need to...

You only find so many great pieces of fanfiction, and this is one of them!

~LBW~

I love the intensity of the emotions from each character in your story :)

Makes it believable and fun to read.

Great job!

Oh very nice ending on this one I must say ;)

I love how Jack and Dylan don't rush straight into romance,

'cause got it takes some time!

wow! you actually aren't dead! i am on the edge of my seat for the next chapter

wow, just reaalized that you haven't updated in two years, well, i love it and it would mean a lot to me if you updated

Wow, this is a breath taking and beautiful fanfic. It saddens me that you haven't updated in a real long time. With so much potential but left alone. I'll be glad to see a new chapter soon.

:)

wow...found it...love it n now need mor of it!

plz update soon!

luv Katie

This fic is absolutely amazing. Very well written and realistic. I seriously lost track of time while reading it and felt like I was actually living in the story. Fantastic work. I hope you do update sometime, but I understand what its like to slip away from a story...I have one that I haven't updated in probably two years. I'll still hope that you're a better person than me, and add this fic to my alert just in case you do post more!

PLEASE UPDATE!

I NEED TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN! Or at least tell me that you are alive and that it will be updated someday!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update this...I hella like this story, and you just left it off on such a note...you cant just leave this.

Like you, my time is limited and I don't have the time to say all of the things I would like to say about your story. Your story defys fanfic logic. Usually when the story is about an OC and not the characters that are part of the fandom, the story is terrible and ignored. I liked your character right away. Her character fits into the universe of the movie and her I find her to be complex. Sometimes, however, I find that I would like to see a little more interaction between Jack and his brothers. That's !

Just wanted to say that this is one of the best Four Brothers fics I've read. Keep up with the good work! I can't wait until you update :)

Hey! It's great to see this updated. I hadn't checked the Four Brothers fics for ages and found yours updated. I can't see what else is in store!

I noticed that after you had talked about how Dylan was an excellent dancer, in the scene in the bar in Chicago you wrote, "Neither of us were dancers. We both knew that." Not a big deal, anyway, but I'm also wondering what exactly Dylan had hoped to do in/after college (other than marry Michael). Did she want to study dance/music? It is a little unclear, though earlier in the story she says something about what she wants to do needing good connections. Maybe I just missed it! Anyway, other than that I'm really enjoying the story, update soon! And Merry Christmas!