Reviews for The Origin
WhiteElfElder chapter 5 . 9/7/2019
Too bad Harry did not challenge Eldron to right of leadership...that would have at least brought a pause. Looks like war, or at least combat, is in the scheduled future.
Lordlexx chapter 5 . 3/16/2019
Hmmm, I can't say I approve of Jonas knowing about the magical community. O'Neill yes, considering his position and Landrey getting a small brief would be obvious. After that possibly Mitchell and Carter with them being the next in command.
podlizurko chapter 5 . 2/15/2019
Most intriguing story , hope it gets more love after all this time.
Pandas chapter 5 . 7/5/2016
I really love the story! This is like my 5th time reading it! I really hope u end up continuing this story! Good luck in life
P-Webes chapter 4 . 8/18/2015
Love you story! I've re read it a bunch if times. Your might get more followers I'd u put it the crossover section of either stargate SGC or stargate Atlantis. Hope you decide to update it again soon plseas I really do love you story. And your aren't even that bad a in grammar either. Have a good day
rick chapter 5 . 12/2/2013
NEED DATE...
Fallenangel700 chapter 3 . 5/31/2013
this should be listed as a crossover fanfic.i despise stargate personally and if the fic was listed as a crossover i wouldnt have began to read it as i know i would not like reading.
Mad about the Boro chapter 5 . 11/28/2012
Cool, keep it up.
Mad about the Boro chapter 2 . 11/28/2012
Isn't O'Neill a Brigadier-General? Also why did you make Harry such a pushover? Seriously, if I were in his place, I would have shot them.
loubega chapter 5 . 11/26/2012
please more!
Hasan Saeed chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Please update...
edboy4926 chapter 5 . 8/2/2012
Good story.
Please continue.
kitta160 chapter 5 . 6/14/2010
please write more!
CatWriter chapter 5 . 5/16/2010
hi,

can I continue this story? I really like and want it to continue. I'll just start with chapter 6 and have a reference for the readers to come to this page to read the beginning of the story. If that's okay.

Catwriter
poot66 chapter 5 . 3/13/2010
This is a great story. I can not wait fir the next update.
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