Reviews for In Too Deep
jimintomyjams chapter 4 . 9/25/2015
Are you ever gonna continue this? I see it hasn't been updated since 2006. It has great potential and your an amazing author! I hope you do choose to start writing this brilliant story again! ️
TheLadyOfSouls chapter 4 . 7/14/2015
Great work!
MutantGirl95 chapter 4 . 5/22/2013
I can't wait for the next chapter! I am really enjoying this story!
Vela513 chapter 4 . 10/25/2012
This is a great story. I hope it's not dead?
SavvyEnigma chapter 4 . 9/15/2010
Man, I have been waiting for a sequel to It had to be Blue for a long time! Can't believe you already got four chapters out without me noticiing . . . keep up the good work!
Just unkown chapter 4 . 3/18/2009
Are you stop writing this great story? That kind of story should not be abandoned like that, it has to be finished. So please update in this year if not in this month, I really want to know, what will happen next.
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 4 . 9/28/2008
Dude! Please update soon. I want to know what happens to Sam. Please

update in THIS MONTH AND YEAR!:) Please
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 3 . 9/28/2008
Oh...can't wait for more.
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 2 . 9/28/2008
Yeah that's not really going good for sam. Can't wait to read more.
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Sam. Poor dude. Can't wait for more.
He Who Hides In Plain Sight chapter 4 . 4/17/2008
Great story! The OC, Sam, is actually a believable character, with a well fleshed-out personality, and enough history to make him seem like a part of this world without feeling like he was forced into it like a square peg into a round hole. And so far, all the characters have been In Character, which is something that's tough to do, no matter the fandom.

The only suggestion I have to make for the story's improvement is... A vigilante name for Sam! With what just happened, I really don't think he should be doing patrols in his civvies. For a name, I suggest either keeping with his dark clothing style, getting him a mask, coloring his chain black, and calling him 'Chain Shadow'; or, you could get him a blue motif for his clothing, a ski-style mask, a large dragon stitched on the front of his shirt, give him another weapon to go with his chain, and call him the 'Blue Dragon'.

General Blackout,

Signing Off
eeveemew chapter 4 . 11/13/2007
No! Where's the next chapter? I couldn't sleep until I read the whole thing and now it's not completed!
Karategal chapter 4 . 5/19/2007
Wow, this is one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. Your original character is just so original that I have actually come to like the guy. He's realistic & completely believeable, so unlike most OC's written on this site. The turtles are also very characteristic & similar to their real-selves. I really hope you are going to continue on with this story some time because it is definitely one of the best OC stories I have ever read. Please update real soon!
Maraena chapter 4 . 5/2/2007
I hope this'll be continued, leaving us like that is just cruel and unusual.
Okami1 chapter 4 . 8/23/2006
Wow...just wow. I finished reading 'Blue' and I had to continue to this one too. Great job! I haven't read a story this good in a long time. Keep up the great work! _
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