Yeah, u certainly can't leave it here! U must have Harry and Melanie find out that Brad had a blazing talk with his sister for sending Harry to England with his heart with her!

How about not only do Brad & Kelly accept Harry's and Melanie's magic but they reveal their own?

So, let me get this straight, because Tonks discovered Remus had another he gave his heart to and discovered where Harry Potter has been living, she is willing to divulge the latter and potentially ruin a perfectly good family out of sheer jealousy of the former!?

Methinks you better change the surname of Jessica's parents (unless you wanted people to think her parents were her husband's aunt and uncle).

As far as your title goes, there's a street in London called Bethlehem road, and there is an insane asylum/hospital which used to be named after the the road it was on then over time it was shortened to Bedlam. So, I can only assume that you plan on sending Harry back to a wizarding world that is as full of craziness as Bedlam?

Nice liked it look forward to reading more soon update soon please.

This is such a great story! I want-no- I NEED another chapter and another! It's such a wonderful story!

5 years and no update? Is this story discontinued?

Pleas Please Please write more of this I love Elemental and this is just as good. I think having Harry raised by a loving and caring environment has produced someone Voldemort should really fear. The characater of Melanie is a good anchor for Harry to latch onto. This final chapter had a few things I didn't like. I am a Tonks fan so having her be a kind of Wormtail sucks. The fact you have a love interest other than her for Remus makes me happy, not a fan of that canon pairing I have read too many Honks fics for that to be so and the way he treats her even in this fic turns me off that pairing. So now you have him brokenhearted by a muggle who couldn't accept him being a wizard but his little sister doesn't comfort him at all. Wow. But when he goes to England we have Hermione to help him get over his heartbreak, or maybe even Tonks trying to make up for her mistake. Who knows but I know I want to know more and hope you write more.

Too bad Harry didn't have a assassin's dagger of venom creating fast-acting neurotoxins. Australian funnel-web spider venom x10 normal dose. Close to close range, scratch, they're dead. Dumbledore deserves it for kidnapping and threatening Harry's family. Light-siders DON'T DO THAT!

Too bad about Kelly.

shame you stopped writing... even if it was sad :( :( too sad! :(

i raised my hand!

Good story. With Harry's power levels and control, Harry is going to either be terribly good or terrifically evil. DumbDumb may have brought the destroyer of Voldemort back to England only to release an even stronger evil if Harry's broken heart amd DumbDumb's accusations twist him. A stupid, unaccepting, teen girl could have just caused one of the worst disasters to strike the magical world, and don't forget Tonk's jealous hand in things. I wonder if the werewolves would side with Harry because he was the power they were trying to figure out and waiting for? I hope that when Harry goes back he acts up against DumbDumb and doesn't allow himslef to be controlled or manipulated by him. I wonder if Kelly will get yelled at by Mel, or if Auror's will be called in to modify her memories? Are you abandoning or continuing this story?

tis was pretty good i really enjoyed it

I am glad that you are continuing this story it has potential and what I have read so far has been great. Will Kelly come around or was what she thought she felt not real at all. Will Harry meet someone else or will he have the heart to continue and destroy Moldyshorts and the Leader of the light? Will Dumbledore realize he has made a mistake in his approach with Harry? Will Tonks and Remus last or will Remus realize how he feels about his old love?

Only you can tell us what happens next. I hope it is soon.

Stan

i absolutely love this tory so far, you've got a completly original plot im just sorry i dont know whats happening next, so i wanted to know are you continuing with it

love it so far