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Guest chapter 6 . 3/23/2019 Ok...this has GOT to be one of the best yu yu hakusho fanfictions I've read. Everyone is perfectly in character, the setup is so believable I'd rather like to see it in the actual anime. My only request is that you PLEASE finish this! I know you haven't updated it in over a decade but I cannot express just HOW MUCH I want to finish reading this story. PLEASE! This is me begging. Riley |
Kajihenge Yoko chapter 6 . 3/22/2012 I hope you continue this soon! |
SetsuUzumaki chapter 6 . 8/24/2011 Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase tell me that Kuwa gets knocked out and wakes up in the cell with Yusuke. And that the demons taunt them like bad guys and then leaves them alone together and proves that the evil demons are idiots cause they didn't bother to know about Kuwa's power and Kuwa uses his sword to free themselves XD then Kuwa uses his sword or they find some way to free Heie and Kurama then kick the bad guy's ass! XD I love the humor you have in this story its perfect! You have Kuwa down to perfection! I love the taunting and fight scenes to! There are SO not enough Kuwabara stories out there I hope you update . I'll be waiting. Thanks for sharing the story! |
Tenkasen chapter 6 . 2/27/2011 Hilarious. I love this, the interactions between the characters, each individual's thought proccess, and how well it's all written. And perfectly in character to boot. It's a little disappointing to see that it looks like you've abandoned this story, or put it in a very long hiatus, as I really would like to see it continue. It's hard for me to find a story with good plot, OC's that don't annoy me, and great humourous dialogue and awesome adventure moments at the same time, and yet you've managed it with flying colors. I'm hoping for a future chapter, at least some day. -Tenka |
Shadowolf chapter 6 . 2/20/2011 Interesting, please continue. |
MoonClaimed chapter 6 . 1/17/2011 Okay, I know it's been years, but take this as my heartfelt wish that you eventually continue this story. ...Or at least send me a PM and tell me what would have happened... |
Jengurl24 chapter 6 . 1/10/2011 hey this story is pretty exciting! I like all the witty banter lol. Pls update soon, i wanna see how the hell kuwabara's going to come out of that alive _ |
KKYOKO chapter 6 . 12/6/2010 Oh wow. That's hilarious! I like the way you write Kuwabara. He's hilarious. Update soon please. |
Greenloch chapter 6 . 7/22/2010 What 06? You can't stop now! Well, you can, but i really want to know what happens next! Agh! Hiei and Kurama are out to kill everybody :O |
HeeHeeHee01 chapter 6 . 5/19/2009 Oh my god. This is brilliant! I'm kind of sad that you seemed to have discontinued it. It really is a great story! The characters are portrayed amazingly (it's awesome), and I love the banter. Well, if you decide to continue it, I'm gonna favorite it...just in case. :D |
Titan of Saturn chapter 6 . 5/10/2009 Oh wow, this is awesome! I love how true to the characters you are! I know it's been a few years since you updated this, but I will hold out hope that you will continue this one at least. It's simultaneously laugh-out-loud funny and edge-of-my-seat suspenseful. It's an awesome combination if I do say so. Also, I'm really anxious to know what happens to Kuwabara! Because he's so totally under appreciated! Maybe he figures out a way to cut those threads in one of those moments when Kuwabara does something so extraordinary that Hiei gets all sullen in response, because fighting against both Hiei and Kurama - bad news for anybody. Also, your Kuwabara-Hiei dynamic is great. Best I've ever seen. |
loretta537 chapter 5 . 3/9/2009 please update this story soon |
loretta537 chapter 6 . 1/22/2009 this is a great story so far, i hope to read more soon |
CaptainKay88 chapter 6 . 12/7/2008 Wah! You really need to update this story! It's so wonderful and yes! Kuwabara gets to star! Your Kuwabara is amazing and I love him. I've read all of your Yu Yu Hakusho fics and you do the characters perfectly. This makes me squee so hard and I need to know how Kuwabara gets out of this mess. I know it's been two years since you last updated but hopefully you having something in mind on what to do next. Seriously, you rock! |
TheBeingOfEverything chapter 6 . 6/2/2008 this fic is completely epic! please update soon :D |