This was VERY beautifully written and almost makes up for his character in the manga and anime and really doubling down on how he is so haunted by his past that he can barely move or breathe or think or function.

I sometimes think kakashi and Tsunade are a lot alike. They lose eveyrone theyve ever loved and they are constantly living in the past unable to let go of it, yet hthey still manage to live

This is just like wow the fucking best I've ever read. The poetry is so, so fucking beautiful. You had at the "play hide and seek with Obito is almost unfair", I will never forget it. I mean it. It is all incredible and I am so happy I found it. Your writing style is amazing.

Interesting. What a complex view of Kakashi. It's very touching and I like it a lot. Thank you.

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So beautiful. I found my self crying while I read it.

This is seriously timeless. No joke. The parallels drawn from canon and the sort of weightlessness in the story telling sets a world plane completely out of context to everything and makes this so, so good. The different ways the Kakashi is effected by all the same people at different times and how everything takes a fairy-tale-life-is-real gone wrong sort of turn is amazing.

Ah... my heart aches a little bit after reading this. It was so good, and descriptive, and wonderful! And emotional! It was just so, so good... this is going into my faves!

This is an angsty story but some parts are overly dramatic. It was the wonderful imagery that saved it from being just another one of those overdone Kakashi fics.

I normally hate fics that go the SakuraRin/KakashiSasuke route, but you do it with such grace it works perfectly.

I love the use of children's games in this.

They're so pretty- I never quite know what to say. Deep and meaningful, though, and great job!

Sarah: ... that was ... interesting. very intersting.

Poetically dark. I liked it very much, I did, I did.

i have no idea why you didin't like this story, i loved it. it is very original, i like how you depicted kakashi's links to his past, not as a form of memory but an actual interaction. keep up the good work.

that's so awesome...you have to be one of the best writers on fanfiction! The ending's so sweet.

Great story. I love it, especially the faults in their relationship and the last part.