| Reviews for Tormented Tears |
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batsbloodsoup chapter 1 . 3/23/2018 I DID NOT expect that |
Hyourinmaru Kills chapter 1 . 1/7/2018 YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES |
CaitiAthena chapter 1 . 7/9/2017 why do I immagian him saying that in a overly happy German accent? XD |
Sayonara7 chapter 2 . 6/10/2012 ARGH ED X ROY FLUFF! SOOOO CUTEEEE! And I liked both endings a whole lot! xD What I love about this story is that it mixes a lot of genres together, there's obvious Romance, Angst and I love how you chucked in humor at the end of both versions! :3 |
Crowfether chapter 2 . 6/5/2010 AWWWW! So /CUTE/! loved both the endings! :D |
nukagirl chapter 2 . 8/15/2008 I liked both endings, very well written |
AliceWhitlock5 chapter 2 . 8/11/2008 aw i like both endings! great story! |
Ellen Envory chapter 2 . 4/24/2008 Lovely... both endings were simply lovely. Especially the last one. It just radiates the caring and hilariously volatile relationship between Ed and Roy. And I agree with Roy... IT'S ABOUT TIME ED HAD A MENTAL BREAKDOWN! Really... the minor bouts of depression he exibits in the series are just that - minor. Frankly, I'm amazed he lasted until now! . Anyhoo ~ congradulations on writing a remarkable story! Again-beautiful endings. |
Ilerre chapter 2 . 9/17/2007 Actually I like better the first ending. good job! |
purewhiteriver99 chapter 1 . 9/2/2007 brilliantly written, with an incredibley interesting plot for a one-shot. i love how serious it is at the begininng, so emotional. the way you switch between the two perspectives really helps to explain the scene. all in all, is was done very well, and i love the suggestive ending lines. :D |
E.Mahiru chapter 2 . 11/15/2006 Hm...personally... I liked the first ending better. I mean, it was a mental breakdown, so it seemed like Roy completely snapped Ed out of it. I don't think Ed would really retain such lonely feelings for long...I mean he always does. It's a part of him now...anyway. Enough blabbering. I liked the first one better. |
E.Mahiru chapter 1 . 11/15/2006 Oh yay! I love Ed's comeback. You would've thought that with all the RoyEd stories I read, I would've seen that before, but you are the first! "You are too, apparently." |
loser in the gutter chapter 1 . 11/11/2006 lol. it went from emo, to sad emo, to gay emo, to "WEE I'M GAY!" that's great! |
karone-sakura chapter 2 . 8/21/2006 i liked the second ending better. *shrugs* oh well. Keep up the great work! |
Fullmetal Angyl chapter 2 . 7/19/2006 I cried over Edward's pain. The first ending kind of ruined the story, cheapened it, but the second one complimented it greatly and was much better suited to the characters. You are Very good with emotions and imagery |