Reviews for Best Laid Plans |
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Zanahoriabaila chapter 1 . 11/2/2019 LMAO! These two morons! Fools and children indeed. The beastly way they just ... mowed through all that would be the thorny issues with a shrug a stumble and bluster was so damn funny. I loved it |
Vivaan chapter 1 . 8/21/2017 That was so fun, I'm not even kidding! |
chiyokira chapter 1 . 5/19/2017 holy crap the heck is this amazing crack |
Anime Princess chapter 1 . 12/24/2016 Interesting. So Sasuke can get pregnant, and is going to abort the child she has now? |
novelreader chapter 1 . 7/29/2016 It's fics like this that makes me wish NaruSasu/SasuNaru was cannon.. sighs |
FashionFable chapter 1 . 5/11/2016 Best crack smut ever! You won the internet! /gives you lots of cookies |
acetwolf94 chapter 1 . 4/4/2016 LOLOL! I LOVE IT! |
Kisaki Sakura chapter 1 . 5/29/2015 Amusiung, funny, sexy... more more more, please! |
Heika chapter 1 . 4/14/2015 but a watered down version at best. Based on the math and basic genetics/biology it would be the males with the sharingan in this 1/8 math solution…but the sharingan gene/genes in the X sex chromosome would be identical to Sasuke’s so why would it be a “watered down version”? genes do not work like that. That specific X sex chromosome will have the exact same structure 100 generations down as Sasuke’s UNLESS there is a genetic mutation…and there are A LOT of genes in the genome so the odds of that happening to the handful of genes for the sharingan is fairly slim unless the Uchiha population enters two or three digit millions. Smarts don't get passed down To a degree they do. Genetics determine the design of your neurons. Its why people have different reaction times. While it can be trained there are limits built in. the people who are born at the absolute peak biologically possible or a small/tiny percentage of the population. I cannot remember the math involved specifically (been a decade since I researched it) but I believe it was like 3-5 times faster than the human average. While this increases reflexes (and maybe processing power of the person’s brain, the neurons of the brain are a different kind than the ones that make up what most people consider part of the nervous system) there are different ones that determine raw intelligence, the ability to learn, compute, and infer. You never really described the rest of her body besides her breasts (which had conflicting reports) Funny fic…it does require Indra being female to work out with Ashura remaining male…if they have a son it would be guaranteed for him to have the rinnegan in this case…impossible to have a girl with natural rinnegan though. |
Selene Dreamwalker chapter 1 . 2/11/2015 You kinky little bastards! Oh, I've been wanting something like this for a LONG time. I've never found any that aren't horribly OOC, well, yours is too, but it has a valid reason. And I learned a new word, so that's cool. What I'd really like is Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke screwing around with the Sexy Jutsu. And screwing each other, but that's not necessary for my amusement. |
Alibi Nonsense chapter 1 . 2/1/2015 Oh what a terrible fate, Naruto-kun. What a terrible fate. XD Matrilineal! XD Hah! |
Laudi14 chapter 1 . 11/5/2014 Hahahaha OMG I love it! |
Lupinara chapter 1 . 9/13/2014 THIS STORY. WHY CAN'T ALL NARU/SASU BE YURI/HET? AHAHAHAHAHA. Great job. |
LinkLover123 chapter 1 . 6/29/2014 There should totally be a sequel |
GaaraFreak6 chapter 1 . 2/25/2014 Ok, so i loved this, but can i use this and expand your idea into a multi-shot story? All credit for the idea and any of your work i use for the first chapter will go to you. |