He heheh! XD
End note is funny! Anyways, I was like, "You didn't just kill him."
Then I was like, "Yay yay yay! He's alive- wait, why do I feel sad that he's alive?"

lol.

good story.

:P

omg! wow! lol, drunken hercules is a dangerous one. For a second I actually thought that Iolaus was dead. I was near to tears! and now I'm awed ... loved this story alot, you did an amazing job!

NWG

i loved it good story made me cry a little

*noms of the tension* I liked the quick time skip, how you cut out after Herc's punch... leaving us to wonder what had happened.

You characterised Ares perfectly, loved it.

Hope you've written more!

Good story, and a great idea. They would never show Kevin Sorbo doing this, of course, but the mythological Hercules got into this situation all the time. Keep writing. I'm looking forward to seeing more stories from you.

I loved it! I love Iolaus hurt/comfort! Look up the Iolausian Wheel of Torture if you like it too! It's awesome! Nice job!

Phew- thank the Gods for Aphrodite and Haephestus )

Great fic D

4 HOUR MATHS CLASSES? thud

Sheesh I thought 50 minute Maths lessons were bad enough... 4 hours..I can't even contemplate that...

Sparky

Aw, nice story. Sad. Poor Herc always feeling guilty. :( I liked it though, and very nice twist towards the end. Great job!

It was a terrific read with an unexpected twist. You've retained the mannerisms of the characters in the TV series which was fantastic! There were a few grammatical errors which affected the flow of the story, but other than that, you're well on your way to becoming an excellent writer. Remember, good ideas and a good imagination can't be taught, so don't give up!

Amanda this is really great i remember you talking somewhat about you doing this one i like it though...very interesting and intriguing gives me something to do while im waiting for my auto class to start...lol...but anyways...i don't see any grammer mistakes like in the story you're currently writing ;) you're a great young writer and remember if you can think it you can do it despite what anyone else thinks :D

Wow... at first i didn't know where you going with this but i liked it... I thought you were going to have go fight Hades for his friends life or give up his, or even his powers... that was a great twist... Only shows that you are a great writer...yeah so keep updating this are great stories... i loved the detail you put into it and i felt like i was there... so thanks for the adventure

Orange