Kudos, it is 2020 you stop at 2016

You are doing great, please do more

More please

I wish you luck with the rewriting, I hope to see this get updated someday soon.

Great story, I liked it. :)
Thx for it and the note, that's always very helpful for readers. Ty.

Keep it online, definitively! So people can enjoy it and maybe even help you with the rewrite with constructive criticism.

You should definitely keep this story and continue on. I would really like to continue reading it.

Rewriting a crossover is a trial (I'm int he middle of doing so myself) and they tend to be lightyears better than the first version. Hope you leave this one up though. Looking forward to thw rewrite!

So did you ever finnish this, or did it go into the black-hole of things that were important before college, and just aren't anymore?

i thought that it was funny but i hope to read the new version soon

Man, this story showed potencial.

Please try to continue.

nice story )

I like your writing style (or so ;])

And the idea of the story is very interesting ]

And now the important question:

Are you going to continue the story?*

Because so many peolpe like it and it would be sad if you leave it unfinished ( now that the action begins)

deamon-of-light

*please send me a mail, if you are or aren't going to continue it )

Keep it on so that your fans can content themselves with this until you can start posting the revised version, might want to consider the clone of Jack or at least make the story before then.

i would keep what you have of this story online, because it is a very good read. what i would like to know is when is the repost happening, as i am looking forward to reading it.

p.s. i would contine to write if i were you, as you are a very good writer

Hi,

you did a good job. I only hope that you will keep it online. The story is very funny so please write this to the end.

Wish you good time at working on it.

Bye!

Will this finish?