I'm really enjoying this, please update soon..i'm dying to know what McQueen does with him..

Good premise, good start!I notice it's been a long time since you updated, but maybe you could give this story another shot? Please? I want to know what you've got in store for Ender and Cooper (I also love "Ender's Game"!).

Please keep writing.

MORE, this is a wonderful fic.

Great story all round...

I really like your story and the way it starts. It tracks well and as far as I can tell the characters are true. Please write more

I think this is the beginning of a very good story. There were a few errors of spelling and grammar, nothing really critical. May I suggest, if you're really interested in writing S:AaB fanfic, join the saabfanfic lists at yahoogroups. There are many people there who can give you a good critical review or offer to beta-read. Feel free to email me privately for a more in-depth review of the story.

It's good! I like it! I haven't seen that many fics for S:AABB and I like it! I like how Coop is bonding with the kid! I hope there is more soon!

Love ya,

Sam

I'm a hopeless romantic and damned proud! I support the Shane/Nathan relationship and the Vanessa/Paul relatiosnhips! _

i love where its going! :) feab stuff, i wish they'd never cancelled the show there was so much possiblity with the invitro storyline. keep up teh good stuff hon. :)

Whoops *blush* I typo'd my email in the last review. Still enjoying it!

I love this show, and I'm glad to see people still occasionally writing stories :) I think you've given a great lead-in here to a good plot. It's captured my attention and made me very interested. There are a couple things I would suggest to enhance things. If you'd like the critical feedback, I'd much prefer to email, so I've attached my email to the review for you. Overall, great job!