Can you do a sequal
i love the story

Wish there was more to read

is this a one shot?

a sequel please?

ahh so sweet.

Very good, thanks.

A cute story (but as a side note- since they are together and all it's not called pre-slash...)!

"Do you have any idea how humiliating it was to have you refuse my hand in front of everyone?"

"I took your hand today, didn't I?" - I absolutely loved thpse lines; they were really touchy:D

Great story~

love it, it's so good

SHIT.

I normally don't read slash, but you have made this very believable. I have always had my suspicions about Draco and Harry , at least before book 6, really seemed to have relationship problems.

Good job,

Hamilton

That was a sweet story without being overtly fluffy.

I really like your style of writing, the whole story flows really well and I loved your Harry and Draco! I especially liked these bits:

"Two reasons; Ron, and you."

And: 'The frost melted, as Draco replied "I was eleven years old, Harry. I was behaving as I was taught I should."

And this bit was lovely:

'"I really wanted you to be my friend, Harry. Do you have any idea how humiliating it was to have you refuse my hand in front of everyone?"

"I took your hand today, didn't I?"

"Because I tricked you into it," Draco said sadly.

"You didn't trick me into that kiss," Harry replied softly.

These bits made me squirm a bit:

'cleansing action’ because the term makes me think of 'ethnic cleansing', which is horrific, (but maybe you wanted the Ministry to appear as a kind of hell-bent organisation).

Also, the 'Poofter? Queer? Light in the shoes?' bit made me uncomfortable, because I take a bit of offense to that I suppose. But maybe that's just me.

I loved this part of the story:

'After much coaxing, Draco heatedly, blushing furiously at the same time, admitted that he wanted Harry to have the dominant role in the relationship. He then refused to talk to Harry for over three hours.' I can totally imagine Draco doing this! I can imagine him going off in a huff!

How rotten of Draco to trick Harry into Di Catenas like that gr. And hm, were those bracelets Godric Gryffindor's?

I've been meaning to read this for quite some time. It's quite nice and brings a smile to my face. Thanks for the story.