They're in trouble... Not my problem!
Cool story!

Go Mikey and donnie! Loved this fic! I should really do this with my younger sis or browse some time!

This... was amazing. I guessed what was going on practically from the very beginning, but I think that made it even more hilarious. Fantastic job!

ohoho XD
The lesson of little brothers are the worst painful lessons

Luckily, I managed to figure it out! Donatello and Mikey are epic brothers!

I totally called it! I sooooo totally called it!

I laughed so much. Totally knew what they were up to! XD awesome. Loved it!

LOL!

I do hope that you plan a sequel to that one cause this is outstanding and you did a hell of a job with it.

Thank you for writing it.

Keep writing.

*Hugs & Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

0.0 Wow, Raph and Leo were really at it. And then it really looked like Don and Mike were too. That was some plan they came up with to show Leo and Raph what it was like to hear the two constantly arguing. Awesomely written too. :)

Extremeley cute story, I knew what was going on but you still had me worried there for a moment. Loved the ending, I'd wanna kill them as well after that prank :) :)

That's so good! I knew those two couldn't have been fighting for real. It's nice to see the older boys getting along with each other...even if it's not in a positive way.

I could see the ending coming, but it was still great to read. _

hehe, I figured as much but still well done.

That was great! Donny and- dare I say it?- Mikey are both brilliant!

This was just brilliant. I ADORED it! Even if it all turned out to be staged, I always think it's nice to see two of the brothers fighting BESIDES Raph and Leo, so that made it a very interesting read! And more than that it was nice to see Raph and Leo get a taste of their own medicine. I did sort of figure out almost right away that they probably weren't really fighting, but cute little details like the spill-over of clutter into Don's room, and Don actually flinging things and whatnot did make me doubt my suspicions regularly, and certainly it remained an enjoyable read the whole way through in spite of having predicted their ruse.

This was definitely my favorite part:

Donny rounded on his little brother. "Why don't you say that to my face, you little-" he hissed, outraged, letting loose with a string of highly colourful names and oaths, amazing his big brothers.

Raph stepped down into the living area.

"Jesus Donny, I didn't think you even knew any of them words," he said, surprised, trying to sound off-hand.

"I learned them from you," Don snapped.

Ha! To cute. Great work. :)

XOXO

Whitney