wasn't there also a variant of this fic in which Remus actually goes ahead and rapes Sirius? I think I read something like that a couple of months/ a year ago... love the story. Sirius is such a prideful character, but he also understands that what he did is unforgivable and would do anything for forgiveness. It is always easier to 'run away' than to own up to your mistakes.

Brilliant! I think you really captured all of their characters in this. And yes, I felt something more should have happened after what Sirius did so thank you for writing this. Actuall I wasn't particularly fond of James in this but I understand that him and peter would have been majorly pissed at Sirius for doing something like that to their other best friend. its a horrible situation to be in.
Anyway, I have no real criticism cos this was awesome!

I read the french version first but I had to tell you what I thought of this story.

It was an excellent one shot! It was a bit disturbing and a very hard lesson for Sirius to learn but the way you wrote it made the whole thing amazing. The ending in the dormitory was very funny and it was nice to be back with the Marauders as we know them in the books, laughing and playing together. I liked this contrast between the different parts of the story, but I was still a bit surprised they put the "punishment" thing aside so quickly! The last sentence was the best way to end this story in my opinion.

Awesome story, I definitely loved it. Thank you for this!

I read the translation, but I want to tell you what I feel.

(I suppose that my english is unsound, but understanding.)

It was hard. I particularly love the last sentences - it's intensive. The characters are so harsh and cold...

In fact, I don't find my words to describe what I feel. It's just awesome.

I love this story. :) Its one of the best post Werewolf prank fics I have every read. :)

Love. This.

It's been a long time since I read a story that pushed me through so many different moods as this one! First I felt sympathetic, then sad, nervous, almost ready to cry and by the end I was laughing out loud. You're really an incredible writer, and you've captured perfectly every aspect of the event. I can picture it all happening exactly as you've described it. It's so GOOD. :) Yet another of your stories on my favorites list. There is absolutely nothing to criticise here, but instead, good job on Remus' description of the werewolf in him, and also on including Peter instead of just ignoring him, as many tend to do. Wonderful story. -Lua

Wierdly enough I actually liked this, usually I'm not onto this sort of thing but this actually rocks!

I think what persuaded me to read on is the writing style, which is superb. You write well, without many mistakes and the story just flows!

Amazing!

oh, very good! that was a fantastic story!

T_T... Wow. O_O... Disturbing stuff, but absolutely fantastic at the same time, somehow... Well done indeed.

I really quite enjoyed that, for all the bizarre themes. It was incredibly well written, and an excellent idea. Shame the rape didn't happen though. *laugh*

x Cazzy x

OKay, well, Remus was just a tad bit kinky there, don't you think? Brutal, just about. Good story...I was confused a little bit there for a while, but that would be my fault, because I am easily confused. Teeteewhyell.

Disturbingly good. Remus's monologue during the psuedo-rape scene was extremely well-handled.

unique view on what happened. Sirius always seemed to proud to grovel to Remus. loved it and i hope you write more like it. the ending was perfect. off to read more of your fics!

~Sapphire

Very interesting... while I can't imagine Remus going quite that far given that he couldn't even keep a handle on his friends in canon, it is quite creative of you to have Remus teach Sirius a lesson of having a werewolf inside yourself by relating it to being in a position of being raped. Excellent symbolism.