I don't know if you'll ever see this, almost 14 years after you posted the story, but I have to tell you, this is amazing and I love it. Somehow, I just didn't see the proposal coming, but the story, the emotion of it, every line, I just couldn't seem to read it fast enough to see where you were going, where they were going. So, so good. Thank you for a great read :)

Ultra

What an emotional roller coaster! One second I'm yelling at my phone and the next I'm sqee-ing with excitement. How is that possible in only 3000 words? This is a great one-shot!

Such a sweet ending :)

Fantastic! It's rare for a story to make me cry! Beautiful story!

oh great one shot :D

i'm fucking crying!that was awesome :)

i loved it.

Okay, you made me tear up. I was on the edge of my seat through this fic, because I had no idea what you would do. I love the way you write both Rory and Jess- so perfectly in character that I could just picture this in my head.

And the end! He asked her to marry her! I did not see that one coming but it was just perfect. :D

Wonderful job! :)

Awh, that was incredibly cute :) You've got Rory and Jess' characters down really well!

delightful! i love your stories so much:D you're fantastic :)

I loved this. You had me tearing when I thought this was going to be an angsty fic and she delivers the line about him always running. Amazing writing, keep it up.

Heyy there,

oh wow, that was beautiful. Amazing.

Great job! Beautiful! :]

xox

-Mezz

i absolutely adore it!

it was so beautiful, and so...perfect!

i am in love with this, and i am so happy i actually discovered it so that i had a chance to read it.

absolutely formidable!

-Chrissy

I loved this story. It was so...perfectly imperfect... ;D

LOVED IT!