Okay, this is absolutely hilarious and I love it - reminds me of my lovely pen pal - we're pretty much the same always being like HOW ON EARTH DOES THE OPPOSITE SEX FUNCTION, HELP! Very true to life and great! :)

2 Really good chapters there, i enjoyed them a lot good work :)

I liked this. I always had a feeling that Hermione was writing to Viktor about Ron. It would make sense and I always figured that Hermione and Viktor would stay close friends without romantic feelings (contrary to what Ron believes). I liked what you did with Viktor's personality by the way. He's funny and sweet.

Very sweet two-shot. :)

Very well written! I like it!

This was both interesting and amusing. Viktor is a mysterious character, and this is the first time I've seen an attempt to get inside his head. I really like the friendship that he and Hermione have formed - not many girls and boys can talk to each other openly about friendship and romance. That's a really special bond. And a water version of Quidditch is a cool idea, too. Good job!

This letter had me stifling giggles, especially toward the end. :) You did a really good job writing the way Hermione talks, keeping her very in character. I think it's good that Hermione and Viktor are friends. But on the other hand, I'm not so sure Hermione would be so open and almost forward about discussing Ron with Viktor, even mentioning that she's almost using Viktor (as far as pretenses go). I'll see how he reacts …

Awesome! I especially enjoy the fact that she's asking Viktor, of all people, for advice on how to handle Ron. That's probably one thing I never would have thought off on my own—orange cranberry muffins to you!

I liked this a lot :) It gave an interesting view from Viktor's point of view :) I liked the fact that they were stll very close and that are helping one another to find the right person :) Well done :)

great letters!

lol, yea it is kinda true the advice Viktor is giving Hermione! You did a really great job!

Tsk, tsk- he didn't even apologize for his reply being 3 years late.

whered Bianca come from?

I love this story! I think it's very sweet for Hermione to ask Viktor for advice and it's cute that they are still very good friends! Very creative!

- Opal of Hope

PS: on your profile, it said you graduated from BYU Idaho! Very awesome! I know one of the professors there who used to be our bishop!

i have a simple question. When you say muggle football, are you talking about the American version or almost the rest of the world's football, which is soccer? since you are talking through Hermione, i am going to assume you mean soccer.

:-D A good reply from Viktor. I like how he said he was dense. It's a great job on protraying a guy's POV of a relationship.

~Nixie