I found the story really entertaining and the language used made it seem more realistic! I wish that I could write like you. you should write your own original book to be great! I actually spent an entire day doing nothing but reading this story!

I loved it.

I bet straw berry is carol

Wow. This was soooooo good, that I read the entire fic in two days. Yes, I literally stayed up late reading this fic, forced myself to go to bed, and finished reading the rest of it today. I LOVED it.

But, I must point out that you were wrong. You said the first chapters were probably boring. They weren't! I didn't even consider skipping over them, and I'm so glad that I didn't, because they added so much to this story in the long run. I absolutely adore your main character! He was very easy for me to like, and the way you brought him to life was just amazing! This is coming from someone who typically HATES OC's, by the way. I sat there thinking "aw, he feels bad for her? I just wanna hug him!". Then I thought "I'm stupid, he's an OC. I hate them, remember?" But then I got mad because I realized that I DID want to hug him, and that I DIDN'T hate him, and that I might have CRIED if anything had happened to him. You did a great job! I am sincerely impressed, and I hope to God that you write more of him. Yes, that's it. I am going to pay you $10,000 to write me a book about how good he and Piccolo and Dende and Lians (my 2nd favorite OC in this fic, followed by Greg) get along afterwards. Namekian Party, eh? Anyone? No, just me?

Thanks for the excellent read! hugs

Nicely done. I love Tonkeshin's character and it was fun to see something totally unique

This was awesome! You should make a sequel!

Hi. I know this story has been a long time done, I found it through a favorite chain, but I just want to let you know how much I enjoyed it. The action was so well written and the perspective was extremely interesting. I love Nameks, and as a lady, I definitely appreciated all the namek bootie. *smile* Thanks again for the great story.

I can never get enough of Tonk. He's such a sweetie!

hey hey hey that was totally awsome,i can never right a story that good, believe me i tried, hehe i love your character he's sweet, lol, well see yha

man you really are a great author. not many stories can grab my attention, especially if they're OC based. congrats for one of the fiew fics that i've actually liked the OCs. i love gregs character. he's so funny. sadly i can't picture him how he's described because his character was so much like johny cage (from mortal kombat) who absolutly kicks-butt and is not fat -.-U

carol reall Really REALLY got on my nerves. man she is such a pervert. i loved tonkeshin's view on sex and stuff. it was so humourous. they bit when he blew her of was hillarious. "you don't have a dick!" LMAO

man i was so peeved carol asked him to kiss her. i was kinda thinking eww Eww EWW. but the way they made up was sweet and heart warming.

i like how you made everything seem so really with using only stuff on sounds and smell and textures. i suppose when you don't have sight you rely and treasure all your other senses a lot more.

reading this fic has made me think what it'd really be like to be blind. i guess the world would seem a lot more differnent. i know this review probably sounded really chliche but thas kind how i feel.

your fight scenes are EXCELLENT. one of the best i've ever read. i din't know who i wanted to win. i was so awsome!

Hey, rock on! Saiyans are overrated and Piccolo's awesome.

*grins* tonk has to be one of my favorite namek characters. he's so well rounded, and hell, just likable. he knows how to enjoy life! i'm so glad you wrote again, i had given up hope. .; i've truly enjoyed every chapter in this story, and i had a grin on my face the entire time i read ch. 22. it's been so long since someone actually wrote a quality dbz story. your writing style is just wonderful. it's sad to see such a good story end, but it ended well. him waking up to the radio again just like in the first chapter brought the story about full circle. i would love to read anything written by you, fanfiction or nonfiction. so if you do, let me know please? have a good day!

Wow! I finished this whole fic in less than a week. I Loved every minute of it and appreciate having another yummy Namek to drool over now *grins maniacally* AND I REALLY DID LOVE HAVING TWO DELICIOUS NAKED NAMEKS SHOWERING TOGETHER! *melts to the floor foaming at the mouth*

*sobers* Anyway, like how you kept Piccolo in rigid character, since most of us fan girls try putting a spin on him to our own liking. And I really do hope you write another fic in the future; I'll be the first to review if yah do! *smirks and gives the upside down peace sign*

Good Luck and hope to see you around in the net or for an RP session!

Hey, Wandering Namek, a great ending for the story! I really enjoyed it. The tournament was very well done, the descriptions were wonderful. I like how you carried it on to Tonk going back to his regular life. Hope everything else is going well for you _

Done? Already? Cripe, it feels like it just started... I suppose that happens when you follow a story from start to end. *grin* Imagine my shock when I saw it was updated.

I'm glad that Tonk had a happy ending here, even if he was drunk for half of it. I am still trying to imagine a Namekian accent, and I now find myself wondering if Tonk will ever run across Lians again - and if he will visit Dende, Piccolo, and the others. I'm sure he will, but you never know. *shrug*

Congrats on the story! Now that I know it hasn't been abandoned, I would just like to let you know that I have added it to my C2...I hope you don't mind. It was a very enjoyable fic, and I hope you write more in the future. Good luck!