that's gonna be a thing with Rachel isn't it? XD

Still, I do hope that this little sob story isn't enough to make him just forgive and forget. Yes, she was emotionally vulnerable. But that doesn't make what she did right.

Nice. This is good. This was a good chapter.

So glad to see you let luke go off with wolverine and i can not wait to see how he handles The events in Wolverine and the x-men comics. Also we see hope and Luke's final talk and we see that he is able understand why hope was being the way she was, still would like to see that him tell hope not to force her control over the others and free them from the bond. Lastly I am curious to see what other character interaction he will have also wondering if its the last time Luke will interact with hope, and if we will see a pairing later on as the story progresses. Anyway great chapter, i am always looking forward to you updates, so keep up the good work.

So one sob story later and the mc forgives hope and moves on in seconds as if she just hadnt been controlling her team mates? Mc is starting to slowly dwindle away at my hope for this story.

Such a spineless MC. I don't know if its coincidence or plain bad luck, but a lot of stories I seem to find these days have really spineless MCs.

I'm annoyed with the MC. He lets everyone walk all over him and just keeps on forgiving them. Just kill hope and break cyclops legs. At the least let him get to know other mutants.

Loving it but I'm surprised you didn't choose other jumps like Marvel’s Kid Heroes or Avengers Vs X-Men to be more inline with the time frame or are you going to use them later?

Oh, schism is here. Shit is about to go down Luke. Go with Wolvie, bro. Even if you have to deal with the cunt of Quentin. Trust me, you dont wanna be in Phoenix zero zone.

So Lucas is finally free of the psychic control which means Hope won't be getting her way anymore now that Lucas can stand up to her. I Am curious to see how events might change since we are now approaching schism soon. It will be cool to see Lucas go off with Wolverine along with idie to carve out his own path, also would love to see Lucas cut loose with his power to show everybody what he can really do. Plus love how wrote the scene between Emma, Scott, and Lucas it shows that Lucas is not afraid of confrontation even with the big names. On a side note I am not to sure about codename Star force, I would think the names Force or Reach could really stick out but that is my personal opinion, it's your story. Either way great work on the chapter and I am looking forward to reading more.

Interesting story. I'm enjoying it so far. Definitely looking forward to Luke breaking out of the weird slave thing going on.

When is he going to break free if ever? So far, he's just woken up and become a meat puppet

There's an unfinished sentence in the Kitty's character entry. 'She is also seeing' what?

The whole team is a bomb about to blow up. Cool, always is interesting to see how one of our world would react to the always needless drama that the x-men have XD I bet as soon as you give your mc a pairing, you will have no choice as you progress to give him a love triangle. It s inevitable

I like this story so far you managing to incorporate the MC into comic very nicely and the gravity omega level powers are very cool. I am curious to see the MC start to show how different from the rest lights that he can actually resist Hope control/influence and maybe the rest of the lights would look to him for help. Also I wondering if you are going to work in a pairing. If not it's cool it still great story keep up the good work.