wow! okay i seriously loved that! that was so good!

This is such a sweet story! I love it! Tony and Michelle are so cute and this story makes them even cuter. Great job. I hope you write more T/M fics.

beautiful! i luved it!

Aww. This is sweet.

great fic! it was so cute. you should write some jack/kate fics. keep up the good work!

ah..how sweet. I love his story. I love it to pieces. That was a really good and I like the whole "screw protocal" thing. it really sounded like something that Tony would say. Great job.

Chrisfaithalin

That is so adorable! I love Tony/Michelle! I'm gonna start writing my own fics for them.

Great story. Tony is always a fave of mine and I really like Michelle too. Well written, good job.

Jericho..

Great story, I loved it. Please write more Michelle/Tony fic.

I loved this story! I'm quickly becoming a Tony/Michelle shipper so please keep writing!

Wow! That was really good and i loved how you made refference to Mason, he was my favourite character. Please write more 24 stories soon lol.

Not bad. Tony seemed a little too desperate but I thoroughly enjoyed the cursing-in-Spanish thing. You can write other stories, with Jack.

-Ira Gaines "Either you're dead, or you're not. You can't be sorta dead. Here, let me show you."