| Reviews for For Al |
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   Chirpo chapter 14 . 7/21 Aww we. This was absolute GOLD. It was so wonderfully written. The way this was written from Roy's pov and how vividly described his thought process is. The copious amounts of sweet, sweet fluff. Just - wow. This chapter was absolutely amazing. Thanks for posting. I cannot wait to read the next update. |
| SN22 chapter 14 . 7/21 glad that Edward wants open up And Roy Mustang, good for you Hughes too |
| ATPD chapter 14 . 7/21 That is one of the sweetest chapter endings ever! Great chapter and I’m eager for more! |
| Lady Jessica Mustang chapter 14 . 7/20 don't mind me I am here just with my heart melting with all of the fatherly love I am feeling from Roy and Maes but especially Roy |
| sarahpuryear chapter 14 . 7/20 Maes, Roy, and Ed made me soft. Ed deserves so much better |
| BronwynSP06 chapter 13 . 7/19 you literally have no idea what means I'm using to check if there's an update on this story. I absolutely love this and your other stories. they're amazing and so are you. I know how annoyed my friends are getting when I always use their Wi-Fi (I don't have it at my home) just to check if there's been an update. I love it. I'm obsessed with it. It's one of the best FMA stories I've seen in my years on this site. Amazing plot, good writing, accurate portrayal of the characters. I love it. Keep doing what you're doing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| SN22 chapter 13 . 7/16 turn out that it will be more difficult that what I imagine before thanks for update |
| Chirpo chapter 13 . 7/16 Poor Ed. :( There's no way Roy and Maes are going to leave him. I hope he opens up to Roy and Maes about his doubts soon. This was a wonderfully written chapter. I look forward to reading your next update. |
| ATPD chapter 13 . 7/16 Great chapter! I’m really looking forwards to when Roy meets Hohenheim, so I hope it comes soon! |
| xmenfan33 chapter 13 . 7/16 Oh this poor child. :'( |
| sarahpuryear chapter 13 . 7/16 Ed :( people wouldn’t abandon you just because Hohenheim hurt you :( I feel so sad for him |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/12 Hi! I love your story, and it is excellently written so far. But is there going to be another chapter? It’s been a while since you updated. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/7 lying on the broken ribs sounds bad |
| NovaDeer chapter 9 . 7/8 I love Hughes, so much |
| NovaDeer chapter 2 . 7/8 *Reads "How to Murder a Fictional Character"* |
