Reviews for For Al
Meg55443 chapter 12 . 7/6
Al is going to be so upset when he finds out
xmenfan33 chapter 12 . 7/6
This poor baby
Alchemicwestallen chapter 12 . 7/6
This chapter really broke my heart. Roy's and Maes' reactions were really heartbreaking
SkreeSkraa chapter 12 . 7/6
I will say, I actually do like Hohenheim quite a bit in the manga/Brotherhood, but he does make an excellent plot device... you've done a great job with this. I'm always looking forward to the next chapter. And finally we HAVE THE REVEAL! Can't wait to see Mustang vs. evil!Hohenheim, of course with Maes and hopefully some Team Mustang as well...
Chirpo chapter 12 . 7/6
I'm so glad they found out. Now they can go and set Hohenheim on fire! But only after taking care of poor Ed.

I absolutely loved this chapter. It was soft and sad and so, so sweet. The interactions between characters were on the dot. Thank you for posting another wonderful chapter. I can't wait for your next update.
ATPD chapter 12 . 7/6
Oh, I am looking so much forwards to when Roy gets his hands on Hohenheim!
MiuraWtr chapter 11 . 7/2
Great
finally Mustang know
T.T
ATPD chapter 11 . 7/2
YES! FINALLY HE’LL KNOW!
Chirpo chapter 11 . 7/2
Oh thank god. They'll finally figure it out and Ed's going to be taken care of and Hohenheim's going to be set aflame. Yes! Thanks for another great chapter. I literally cannot wait for the next update. :)
user needs a username chapter 11 . 7/2
Well, honestly, the only thing I can think of is that those sheets won't be white anymore. Great chapter! Please update soon!
Lady Jessica Mustang chapter 11 . 7/2
I hope their finally found out about his back and get him and Al away from that man
and I so want papa Roy to happen
Alchemicwestallen chapter 11 . 7/1
Roy and Hughes are getting ready to find out! Finally!
SkreeSkraa chapter 11 . 7/1
And so it begins... AAAAAAAHHHHH I've been waiting for the next chapter! This is definitely one of my favorite fanfics!
MiuraWtr chapter 10 . 6/26
Oh no...
Just the nose? what about the back? T.T
okay2 I understood though
it will dealt in the next or next next chapters
thanks for writing
I really enjoyed it
MiuraWtr chapter 7 . 6/26
omG I already reach this chapter
T.T
Oh Ed!
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