| Reviews for For Al |
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   ATPD chapter 14 . 7/21 That is one of the sweetest chapter endings ever! Great chapter and I’m eager for more! |
| Lady Jessica Mustang chapter 14 . 7/20 don't mind me I am here just with my heart melting with all of the fatherly love I am feeling from Roy and Maes but especially Roy |
| Alchemicwestallen chapter 14 . 7/20 Maes, Roy, and Ed made me soft. Ed deserves so much better |
| BronwynSP06 chapter 13 . 7/19 you literally have no idea what means I'm using to check if there's an update on this story. I absolutely love this and your other stories. they're amazing and so are you. I know how annoyed my friends are getting when I always use their Wi-Fi (I don't have it at my home) just to check if there's been an update. I love it. I'm obsessed with it. It's one of the best FMA stories I've seen in my years on this site. Amazing plot, good writing, accurate portrayal of the characters. I love it. Keep doing what you're doing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| MiuraWtr chapter 13 . 7/16 turn out that it will be more difficult that what I imagine before thanks for update |
| Chirpo chapter 13 . 7/16 Poor Ed. :( There's no way Roy and Maes are going to leave him. I hope he opens up to Roy and Maes about his doubts soon. This was a wonderfully written chapter. I look forward to reading your next update. |
| ATPD chapter 13 . 7/16 Great chapter! I’m really looking forwards to when Roy meets Hohenheim, so I hope it comes soon! |
| xmenfan33 chapter 13 . 7/16 Oh this poor child. :'( |
| Alchemicwestallen chapter 13 . 7/16 Ed :( people wouldn’t abandon you just because Hohenheim hurt you :( I feel so sad for him |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/12 Hi! I love your story, and it is excellently written so far. But is there going to be another chapter? It’s been a while since you updated. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/7 lying on the broken ribs sounds bad |
| NovaDeer chapter 9 . 7/8 I love Hughes, so much |
| NovaDeer chapter 2 . 7/8 *Reads "How to Murder a Fictional Character"* |
| NovaDeer chapter 1 . 7/8 Jeez, I thought the first chapter was supposed to ease you into the story not gut you immediately |
| MiuraWtr chapter 12 . 7/6 glad this story already updated I can't imagine how hurt it is too see such wounds and moreover being as Ed himself T.T good chapter |
