Suck it, Wheatley.

Woah, this is surprisingly good for a rather short story.

You know, I like a good, dark fic, no matter how much I love our Wheat boy. This is more tragic than Wheatley running out of power while in space, I think! Well done!

You know, I think it is a good story. I just wish that it wasn't so short.

I saw your review and see that you got your formatting issues figured out. Glad to see it! I really like the story itself and I think you did a good job writing Wheatley's character.

Oooh... the ending was way darker than I had anticipated at first. The formatting doesn't affect the reading experience (at least not on the mobile version) and your writing is fine.
Well done!

Hi there! CelestialCake here. I've been having problems uploading my story, so, really sorry for the weird formatting of the story. There are supposed to be barriers separating certain events, but they won't come up whenever I post. Also, since I am a new user, it won't let me repost a 3rd time today. Tomorrow I'll retry. Sorry for the inconvenience.