A very interesting story, kept me reading from the start until I reached the end some hours later. I hope to see it continue, I like this much more serious kakashi a lot.

Fantastic update will Karin join her fellow Uzumaki. I hope danzo gets his just dew and Uchiha clan get their pride ect back

This is a good story.

This is so good! Please never stop writing!

man you keep surprising me and i love it fantastic work

So, the truth is out and that's not good. You know I think feeding Danzo to Naruto's fox family would be a good idea.

Well... Honestly, that was a big nope for me. Hiruzen and Kakashi were trying to keep Naruto a secret and Danzo feels like he can reveal it like that? Excuse me but why didn't Hiruzen just execute him? And even assuming Hiruzen has use of Danzo, Kakashi isn't obligated to nominate a team for the exams, period. "No Danzo, fuck off, I have only one genin and I do not wish for him to enter the exams for now. Over."

Here, it really screams "plot!" in a loud and unelegant way. It just doesn't work naturally. At all. It should not happen, there's no reason it should happen yet it happens. Why? Were you afraid to deviate too much from canon? We've seen the exams from the inside a hundred times in ff already so doing something else would net you the enthusiasm of your readers.

Anyway, best writing to you,

Good job on the length. Very comfortable.

Great story! Can't wait for the next update!

Well it’s not bad to use their Biju’s chakra. It’ll probably unsettle and scare a few genin during the exam, but that’s probably for the best. Do you plan on doing anything special with Karin, since you’ll have an opportunity to potential grab her in the near future?

Danzo needs to fall asleep.

Naruto is just too sensitive to chakra Lmao

I know you these things for droma but i dont like it

I hate Danzo. I liked sai but when he's not on Danzo's side.

An excellent chapter! I am totally enjoying this story and am so looking forward to the continuing updates!

Interesting couple of chapters, kinda disappointed Sakura won't be part of things, at least for now? Maybe you have plans for her maybe you don't. Time will tell I suppose.

Gotta say though, you're advancing things a bit swiftly. We have no clue what kind of progress Naruto has made so far, both with training and for lack of a better term 'domestication'. We know Kakashi is lacking as a teacher and Sasuke is just kinda there. Danzo is up to no good, go figure, and old man Sarutobi may have a plan to counter it. We'll see I suppose. Looking forward to the next one.