What!
You can't end it there, you absolutly must continue (I'm saying this in the nicest way possible). I looove this story maybe you could write a sequel or just continue this one? I don't know but please continue this story please.
Thank you so much for your writing,
Me

This is really excellent. The author did an outstanding job staying true to the in canon personalities of the characters in an AU setting.

Very good story! Thank you for allowing us to read it over your shoulder!

I love it
Thanks

Enjoyed the story and wish there was a final conclusion or a sequel.

Well, I’m just sitting here wondering if a house elf was sent back to Surrey to get Harry’s belongings. He will want at least his invisibility cloak, map, and photo album.

Absolutely brilliant!

I enjoyed this story, particularly the moment where Lucius facepalms in the corridor (yeah, I have a strange sense of humour...). But the one thing I'm astounded about is that Voldemort didn't literally eviscerate Lucius. If he could take back his favour by making the Dark Mark fade to grey, then why on earth would he not do it rather more forcefully? Such as, killing him in the dream so that he never woke up?

And if it's Lucius' change of allegiance that faded the Dark Mark, I find myself wondering how in the world Severus Snape managed to fool Voldemort with a faded Mark.

Or maybe I'm just overthinking it.

Anyway, another favourited story. Usually by this stage I'd have deleted all the stories I favourited from my list and simply Favorited you as an author... but I don't do slash. However, I am very much liking your genfic!

Love this fic. Wonderfully written, and unique.

Molto complessa questa fiction. Mi piace anche perché la tratti con leggerezza e quindi inno diventa una lettura pesante e angosciante ( non il mio genere) è un modo molto intelligente di scrivere.

Very good

I loved this! In reading some of the reviews I have to wonder if we were reading the same thing? I have to say I enjoyed every word and hope with all my heart that you either continue it as a full story or give us some one shots into the future. Thank you for sharing your talent with the fandom!

Interesting take on what it take for Lucius to switch sides. While it was nice to see Harry place conditions on forgiving Draco- I thought he was pretty quick to forgive Lucius considering he both mistreated Dobby so badly and almost got Ginny killed (along with several muggleborns that could have died and were petrified for months on end). And Draco at least has the excuse of being an 11 year old boy, Lucius was adult with the full capabilities of understanding the consequences of his actions.

I'm also unsure why Harry was so offended by the tracking charms on the letter that Ron sent. Harry mysteriously vanishes with a known Death Eater that the last of anyone's knowledge was setting a trap against Harry for Voldemort but no one is supposed to find it strange that Harry is suddenly hanging out with him? Harry's supposed to be insulted that they are checking to make sure that Harry left of his own free will? I could see being insulted if they were unwilling to even hear his side of things but taking proper precautions against what appears to be a surprise attack seems incredibly sensible so I honestly don't know why Harry was so upset with Ron over it.

Wonderful story, well thought out and executed only wish it was longer , well done x

yes this was Beautiful