Read the whole thing in just over an hour - its good but with slightly bigger chapters it could have been so much better... like adding the aftermath of his none appearance at the Ball. could have been a great story, with very little effort. You are such a good writer I find myself a little disappointed.

Excellent cynical, smart Harry. Screw wizarding Britain

This was a lottle dark but think Harry did the right thing

A hard, but ultimately fair, read on S.O Black. The stark reality was that his motivation for escaping Azkaban WAS to wreak revenge on Wormtail, not to honour his duty as a godfather to H. Other than his (frankly ostentatious) gift of the Firebolt, did he EVER do anything positive for H ?

He really SHOULD have pursued a writ of damages on the Weasley family via a good lawyer and submitted the requisite memories should they consider fighting the case ?

Lovely uppercut to the jaw for dear old Dumbly Bumbly; undone by his own hubris. They say in politics that "once you start believing your own bullshit, its time to (ahem( hit the road. Arguably something Dumbles should've done not long after the Grindelwald war.

Loved this story, just Harry’s thoughts and then actions. Harry always gave people chance after chance; and I am so glad that you had him realize that family is not suppose to be the way they are portrayed in the book.

I read one more chapter. What I was really annoyed with (my last review) was fourth year. There was very little there of the fourth year happenings, nothing of real sustance.

I am leaving the story. There is just way too much that is unwritten. It jumps from year to year without really saying anything at all.

I don't see why he kept the mirror, after Sirius proved to be as useless as the others.

Dursleys were kissed? Good riddance.

I like the format of this story. Instead of having interactions of multiple people with a main character, its more of introspective of the main character's musing. That's a bit hard to pull off but you've done well so far. I've enjoyed seeing Harry's thought process as he goes over the year's events. and here it seems he's noticing things don't always add up, even with his own behavior. He's spent a life with the Dursleys being on guard. While it makes sense he came to Hogwarts in first year optimistic, after the disappointment at end of year, with his history Harry should have been less optimistic coming into 2nd year.

I love every damn thing pointed out in this fic! You created an awesome work and I really hope to see more from you!

Well, Sirius really screwed himself in this. He should have backed Harry 100% of the way, but didn’t and now the kid wants nothing to do with him or the others.

I don’t think that Harry should be completely alone; that would be letting the Dursley’s win.

He should take them to court with the proof of their abuse, see to it that they’re fined, jailed and have Marge’s dogs put down.

Ooh! Amazing! I'd love to read the Order's veiw along with Sirius's and Remus's. :)

Fun read, like this series. Often enjoy it when Harry is no longer a tragic pawn in Dumbledore’s grand game. Nice job

Well deserved scolding.

Good luck, Mr. Potter. Stay free.