Poor zim dibs a asshole

I get chills at the part where Dib asks Zim if he is afraid and sticks the needle in right as Zim protests. I don't know why. It's just so vivid in my mind and I have a phobia of needles so it seems especially sadistic and scary to me and ugh...I just love the image. I love to think about how Zim would react if he woke up strapped to a table. I honestly think all his walls would crash down and he'd just panic. I never get sick of reading fics where that happens. Anyway I love this fic. The ending feels unfinished to me but I can understand why after a period of time you wanted to end it there.

I love zadr

This is a pretty good and interesting story. Like where it is going

I loved that story but I hated the ending, sorry but I think it could have been so much better! I know you can do it since the whole story was amazing! You have a well elaborated plot that matches the characters personlity, they were not ooc! You can still work on a better ending for them! Keep it up!

I absolutely loved reading this! Everyone was in character, which I applaud you for. I do believe this is deserving a sequel, for I found some unanswered questions. At the end of chapter 8, you mention a military van parked at the end of the road. Why was that van there? Was the Professor involved? Why was the Professor working with the military? I would love to see these answers transformed into a sequel and a whole new plot line. I understand if you do not feel like writing a whole other book, but would very much appreciated it. I will be sure to check out your other works!

So much to process. The descriptions of Grim's body were my favorite. Few put thought into the differences in his anatomy. Happy to find this completed. Keep writing, you're good at it.

That's actually a pretty good ending! To a pretty good story! It left unanswered questions though. Why did Zim live after the PAK was removed? What will happen to Zim after Dib dies of old age if Irkens live so much longer? What was Doctor Membrane doing for the military?

And that, kids, is why you always have condoms handy. In case you need to fuck an alien.

Aw, Gaz has characterization! Crazy.

See? I told you nothing could go wrong.

NOTHING COULD POSSIBLY GO WRONG

I completely understand that Zim-and Dib!-have to go through all of this crap... otherwise, there wouldn't be so much delicious angst and drama and suspense and... yeah, plot! Haha. So yes, while I am definitely sympathetic to Zim and Dib's plight, I... enjoy reading about it? Does that make any sense/sound sane at all? Ah well.

The ending to this part was really... well, touching, for a lack of a better word. I thought Zim's finding reassurance in the constant beating of Dib's heart was absolutely sweet.

While I was definitely emoting on behalf of Dib during his suicidal monologue, I really liked how everything turned around at the end.

This chapter was so angsty and sweet! I loved it. Can't wait to read on!