For a kid your writing is pretty decent, I look forward to whenever the next chapter comes out.

This is an amazing story! Also, I really like that Wheatley gets saved and doesn't drift around in space until his battery runs out. I really hope you make more chapters soon, but you don't have to rush.

Hmm interesting, illegal genetic testing on children definitely sounds like something Aperture would do.

Also, huh, that assistant's name seems ODDLY familiar...

Anyways, interested in reading more! See you next chapter!

GIVE US MORE PLS

Nice job! I'm a little confused at how GLaDOS is human or in an android form though? Like I like the idea, but I'm not sure when that happened if you're just planning to explain it later on. I would love longer chapters if you could manage it. Excited to see where this goes!

Originally, I thought this fic had no real plot/direction. It started off with what seemed very light hearted themes, and didn't really pick up any steam until around chapters 8 - 9. I appreciate what you did with the story though! Keep up the hard work and make sure to have a clear vision of what the plot is about.

I love it

this is great

I love it

5 stars! Can you bring wheatley back to chell

i love it

So there's another Aperture Survivor? Sounds cool! I want to read more now!

This story looks promising! Can't wait for the next chapter!