i'm wondering when your going to update this story? it's agood story!

okay i know you've written so way years ago but .. i should say its so damn awesome! WOW!

plz update it as soon as possible plz plz plz *begs* pretty plz

c'mon I love this! and leaving it hanging there is so not right,Pwease update..

NWG

Worth the wait, but I hope you don't make us wait so long for the next chapter.

Your spelling errors/typos are decreasing but, if you don't already have a beta, I suggest you find one. If you do, get a second one.

Keep up the good work. Your plotlines are terrific.

MORE MORE MORE

Your second chapter is even better than the first, but you really need to use your Spell Checker.

I look forward to reading more.

that was really great - thank you so much for fixing the formatting. i'm glad that cosmo decided to come back, ace will be happy. i love stories that emphasize their relationship and this one is good. keep up the excellent work :)

Poignantly written. Guilt has almost always been a factor that plagues a person, making Cosmo leave Ace, thinking it his fault, when it may be, or may not. Great work!

And welcome to the Magician's world! :D

that was a great start. i can't wait to see what happens next. this is really great!

can you please try to change the formatting though - this is sorta hard to read. it took me a while to figure it out with a word doc - try pushing enter twice between paragraphs instead of just once - thats what works for me. if that doesnt work - i dont know.

anyway, keep up the great work on the story! i cant wait to see more :

Your storyline is good. I hope to read more. I have two requests:

1. Please check your spelling more closely

2. Please watch your language. You can get the emotion across without being foul mouthed.

Very well done. I hope to see more fom you in the future.