Reviews for Open Eyes
Pip the Dark Lord of All chapter 1 . 2/2/2015
Funny! ;)
Stormcutter684 chapter 2 . 1/12/2015
Hahaha that's cute. :p
Yeah, I would have a heart attack if I saw Legolas or even one of my siblings with their eyes open sleeping.
Hahah XD
ZJFS chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
This was cute.

Eminnis
Rutu chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
nice. . .wow, I'm on a roll today. . .that's got to be, what, your sixth fic I read today. . .or something like that. . .
Deana chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
LOL cute ;)
Stoneage Woman chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
This was hilarious. Well done again!
Lutris chapter 1 . 1/13/2004
Legolas surrounded by four anxious hobbits makes quite a wonderful scene!
Dog Soup chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
Thank you :)
Anastasia Who chapter 1 . 10/24/2003
Very cute and very funny. Great job.
Coolio02 chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
LoL! That was funny! Good job!:)
Frodo3791 chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
Lol, cute story. That would freak me out. Ah, the fellowship grows in understanding of their companions. Nice work.

-Frodo
Pansy Chubb chapter 2 . 5/25/2003
This is a very cute story, I'm glad I ran across it. I would also be freaked out seeing the elve lying there with his eyes open. Very funny.
Lamiel chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
This could stand to be fleshed out a little more. I think that showing the hobbits' reaction to this discovery is a nice idea, but you could carry it a bit further. Have them ask questions: why don't elves' eyes dry out? Do they see anything around them? What do elves dream about? Tolkien also says that elves can sleep even while walking-that might be something else to explore.
iluvglorfindel chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
LoL!poor little hobbits!keep writing short stories!
S0lstice chapter 1 . 5/5/2003
James, great story, as usual! Aw, poor Hobbits didn't know. You do a great job with all their personalities. They all have perfect reactions!

Oh, and for my story, I'm glad you seem to like the Isorfinduil and Elladan clashing. Everyone seems to enjoy that a lot, which is something I didn't really expect. And I will work on a back story for In the End, but I may have to wait for this one to get done. But this is a review for you, so enough of this!

Like I said before, the reactions were perfect. I picture in my head your story happening in the movies, and it fits in quite nicely. And not just this one, I mean all of them. And you always come up with new and interesting topics! Keep up the great work, I look forwad to hearing from you and more of these stories!

Amorous
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