Reviews for These Games We Play |
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![]() ![]() This has potential! Kinda sad that you're abandoning this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting story, hope your muse comes back to it some day! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, cool story! Please keep writing, I like these types of stories! |
![]() ![]() Sounds like a fun story! Looking forward to more, thanks for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write three bullies and then you list five of them |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting stuff looking forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interestimg story, won't say if its good or bad for quite a few chapters though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good story so far, I'm glad to have found it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Observe is passive? If that were true he would get all information on everything. He has to consciously ask for more information for observe to work and that makes it an active skill |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm looking forward to see how this Harry turns out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting concepts with good grammar (FINALLY) and a good chapter length with a cool plot and a slow character build that is great but not too fast to make it unlikeable and to give some character building. Only complaints is it would be nice to see his stats and all that good stuff in maybe a separate chapter/story or even at the bottom. |