It was an interesting story. But I’m not interested in wrong boy who lived stories so this is where I leave it. Good luck with your writing.

Getting multiple dueling scenes was a treat! And again, great work on the lore and plotting (that Tom Riddle scene with Amy was some anime villain sh*t).

A note about Ginny: Seeing what she is like in this story has such emotional weight behind it for me. With a competent Voldemort, a realistic imagining of what would've happened to her in her 1st year, and her setup performance in this chapter, I'm really curious to see what develops here!

Also, given your responsibilities and schedule, I don't mind the rate of updates. Hopefully you aren't getting hounded about that. Looking forward to your next work too, especially if it's inspired by kathryn518 (absolutely love her stuff). Cheers.

I think "I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For" to be one of the best stories that have been left unfinished on the site, along side plums "Last Second Savior" and Mountain907's Cursed Summer Series.

I would hope for Potter/Star Wars mostly because it feels more possible for a Crossover to occur. a Portal forming due to Potter Magic doesn't just seem possible it seems like something Canonical just not explored.

My one hope would to see Harry as a Bounty Hunter or something like that, the SW universe is ENORMOUS there is no reason Harry ONLY has to deal with the Jedi and their problems. No HK-47... please... Please every Crossover does HK... He's not even cool anymore because of it...

As for this story, another good chapter, I question obviously how Ginny Survived if Tom escaped his Diary? Look forward to how that happened, like that there is a certain level of a love triangle going on, they are teenagers and young adults and none have been described as hideous, it seems more likely that they would all feel some level of attraction to each other.

Your HPs character is just not consistent. One hand he is uber assassin, next he is struggling with a student. He shows considerable minds arts with Snape and next he falls for some unknown.
Also, for a HP story he has less presence. On top f that too many OCs. Also, Ginny even if she has Voldemort in her head , it is still thr student Tom Riddle.
An assassin from th so called uber Elite training is surprised at the her skill?
The inconsistency is the major problem with this fiction. I guess this is due to the long breaks between the chapters and the author's often forget their own plot.

Kan jy afrikaans praat?

Getting caught up with this story and I appreciate the research it took to create an AU this complete. Plus, I appreciated the Texas out last chapter. However, my girl Nym being evil? I'm noping on that one. I can accept a lot of things, but my girl being evil is a bridge too far!

Nimibian?

great chapter

It seems strange with harry utilizing occlumency but also somehow not looking someone in the eye led to a break in his barrier. Seems to shift quite a bit from canon where its direct spell usage of legilimens or direct eye contact.

Hermione Granger, the best duellist of Hogwarts? That's bullshit, theoretical knowledge does not extend to practical use.
What about having all the Canon figures as top duellists? Fuck you're deluded.

Oh yeah, the drunken master style as Welsh? Are you retarded or plain ignorant?

Hermione Granger, the best duellist in Hogwarts?

I would’ve thought that Harry would’ve had impressive mind skills so that his enemies wouldn’t know who he really was

Nice depiction of voldemort's charisma; I've always thought that the voldemort in the books doesn't line up with jkr's description of how he's charistmatic and persuasive, she describes him like that but then seems to try and make him look more like a villian instead of a charming guy who's able to make his ideologies seem like the right side.

me mid-reading: why do i feel that Salome is going to sacrifice herself for John/Harry in the future?

Good chapter. All I ask is no love triangles. I hate those, and think they are ways to create melodrama 'easily'.