Hmm, the idea is pretty good, not bad. And I know its supposed to be a joke/crack fic and all, but Jaune just going "Meh Grimm" and casually interacting with Salem is pretty darn out of character. I know it's meant to be that way to kind of make it funny, but it just feels, really forced.

Truly beautiful

Jaune and Mommy Salami are so adorable lol. There’s gotta be moar

This is heaven rather than hell though.
A happy Salem means one that kick Cinder.

*sip some chocolate*
I like what I see.

Ozpin's reaction to this would be priceless. Jaune hooked up with his ex.

To be fair, I would probably feel exactly the same Cinder.

I thought this was a one shot! While I do wish the chapters were longer I love the idea and how it’s going!

I love this idea!

Welp, Salem has regressed into a lovestruck naive teenager. And you gotta appreciate Jaune's can do attitude here. He missed initiation, missed his chance to be a Huntsman and be a hero and is he upset? Nope, he's showing off his mad cupcake making skills and getting tickled by Remnant's Satan. That's the mark of a hero right there. And he inadvertently knocked out Cinder, something he was never able to do in canon! I say that's a win in my book. And he defeated Salem! Yes, it was in cupcake making but I don't see Ozpin doing even that.

Oh God, Salem is probably going to inadvertently start making Grimm that are incredibly adorable. She's going to see Jaune's hoodie and how much he likes Pumpkin Pete and we're going to get a Pumpkin Pete Grimm that hops around and only eats cereal (and uses the blood of it's victims as milk). I wonder how long before Tyrian starts the cult of Jaune the Lost, maker of cupcakes, drinker of booze and crush of Salem?

I like how literally all that crazy evil lady needed was to have some fun and relax. I’d die if emerald started to treat jaune like a she were a clingy little sister and Mercury went full I’m taking this guy as my replacement dad. Having all that happen driving cinder progressively more insane.

I love it it's silly and stupid and I just love it keep it up my friend I would love to see them becoming closer and just everyone's reactions to it especially a certain group of people with that said like always have a nice day. P.s it would be fun if the grimm queen turns lovey-dovey and overprotective of Jaune I would pay to see it happen.

Okay, two things.

1.) It's the Fall Maiden (Amber) she attacked and whose powers she partially stole, not the Spring Maiden (that's Raven).

2.) Giggly and pouty Salem is now the best Salem. My god you managed to make her kawaii...

Big ups to you sir. Big ups to you.

Salem is very OOC here, extremely and incredibly. It's like she's a completely different character.

Please continue, I like OOC Salem.

OMG, OMG...I CAN'T! This is too damn funny. Like, no joke, my ribs are sore and my lungs are burning for laughing for like ten minutes straight. This right here...this...just, good job,friend.