| Reviews for White Eyes |
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nahson2 chapter 43 . 7/23 imagining sasuke say GG no re gives me such a funny image in my head |
Jasmine-Fields-1979 chapter 29 . 7/18 I am so loving this story! Thank you for the laughs and also the intense fight scenes - not to mention the friendship building! |
angel from hells depth chapter 96 . 7/4 this was great |
angel from hells depth chapter 12 . 7/1 i was laughing my ass of when naruto was the hokage |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19 Seriously, what neji said was very fucked up in chapter one |
Inuyonas chapter 95 . 6/16 I just wanna thank you. Thank God for your existence. If you dont believe in God then thank the universe for falling some how into having the capacity to situate a planet with specific conditions for life to emerge and then human consciousness to come into existence and somehow a shit ton of time later you were born. Lol 96 chapters 96 days of bliss Is there a sequel? |
AureliusBlack chapter 96 . 6/8 This was a phenomenal fic and you did a great job writing it. I really liked how even though hinata was supposed to be an avenger, you still gave her a sense of humor. Everyone in this story felt real and their actions never felt strange or conflicted with how you’d expect them to act. You did a great job of developing the friendship between naruto and sasuke in particular. It was always funny seeing the shenanigans they’d get into and their friendship was adorable. Your fic also literally made me laugh out loud multiple times. After I thought there was no way you could fit in more jokes, you went and threw in more. The only thing I wished we could’ve seen more of was a bit more NaruHina stuff, but they were... kinda busy the entire second half so I understand why there wasn’t more of that. I also wished we could’ve seen more of naruto’s power since it felt to me that in the final face off, it was sasuke and hinata doing stuff and naruto on the sideline, though I suppose I could’ve been a callback to when kakashi talked about naruto being the backup for their team, but I wish we could’ve seen him kick some more ass. But in any case, you did a great job! |
DarkeDragonBoss chapter 96 . 6/8 Shrek approves of this story. |
Inuyonas chapter 72 . 6/7 This is still amazing as fuck. |
Chisaki Kouu chapter 75 . 5/30 DUUUUDE YOU THINK OF EVERYTHING! THE REASON OLD DUDE FROG WAS ACTING LIKE HE DIDN'T CARE WAS BECAUSE HE KNEW JIRAIYA WAS ALIVE SINCE THE CONTRACT HADN'T BEEN CANCELLED! Holy shit, this is like, 50% crack fic, 50% fucking amazing, yet you're blitzing like, every completed fic I've read to this point. I've been picking up on so many references all around the place, laughing, yet still getting pulled through the emotional rollercoaster called Neji-fucking-Hyuuga's final moments. |
AmberRiver02 chapter 95 . 5/30 I laughed a lot in this chapter. It's been nothing short of a roller coaster ride reading your whole story, and seeing your writing style evolve. Very humorous and detailed and beautiful. And always, I LOVE the Uchiha family interactions. They're so cute and pure and wholesome. Also, I dig into the idea that Sasuke is asexual. You set it up so that it's realistic and believable :) And I liked the idea of SasuKarin a lot actually! Just one thing, and this is my biased opinion: I didn't really see the basis for Naruhina. Hinata became sort of a one-man-tanker who didn't need other's validation anymore. For her to suddenly transition into warm bubbly feelings was abrupt and absurd to me. Hinata in your story is a driven and rather extreme character, in a good way XD. Naruto isn't like that; I thought he was more passive in your story. For Hinata to vent on the past Hokages - I don't see it as something Naruto would appreciate. It seems vengeful and even pretentious on Hinata's part. They can have a fling, but I don't see their relationship lasting. Simply because Hinata isn't someone Naruto has to protect. And that Hinata's morals don't align with Naruto's. Naruto's chemistry with Sasuke was better in fact. I would have seen Naruto with someone else, even Sakura. |
Inuyonas chapter 26 . 5/26 If you look up "amazing" in the dictionary The definition is "this story" |
Tombert chapter 96 . 5/23 i’m so happy i kept up with this story for the past year. it’s easily in my top 5 favorite naruto fanfics and definitely in my top 10 fanfics in general. absolutely amazing |
BLCKFOX2020 chapter 75 . 5/23 sly sly... i really thought orochi died |
BLCKFOX2020 chapter 29 . 5/21 really enjoying the jokes now |