| Reviews for The Beeper King |
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Soph chapter 1 . 7/13/2018 I really enjoyed this take on a character that many are willing to overlook. This was a good read and made me think about life, and who people appear to be, versus how they actually think. Thank you! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2018 This is amazing. I kinda feel bad for Bob. |
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 7/11/2018 Great story here, and yeah, you did a cool job developing Bob's character and background. The thing about Bob is that he believes on hard working, but he has problems at adapting. He'll do things his way until they work out, even if it would be smarter to do some changes. Keep the good writing. |
celrock chapter 1 . 7/11/2018 Awww, this story was sad, but, an excellent picture painted here of what Big Bob's life was like growing up, and why he is the way he is as an adult on the Hey Arnold series. Keep up the great writing! |
SatanSpeaks chapter 1 . 7/11/2018 The stubborn drive and total lack of self-introspection perfectly sums up Bob’s character. He never so much as thinks about his family when he moves out. I thought the “do good” line was going to come back in some hamfisted way, but it doesn’t. No, that’s over and done with, because from his point of view, his mother never cared enough. But, clearly Bob cared, really only about certain people. Miriam feels energetic at first, then suddenly she’s run down and Bob cannot understand why. After she is born he tends to associate events with what grade Olga is in. That’s a nice touch. And lastly, Helga. He clearly has mixed feelings about her, and he’s totally blind to her intelligence. But he does care in some small way. Very good work. |
Lost42 chapter 1 . 7/11/2018 I enjoyed reading this. |
Boris Yeltsin chapter 1 . 7/11/2018 Love this one. Hope you can write more for other fandoms when you can. |