Fui sorprendida , es un poco difícil de seguir pero entendí lo básico. Me gustaría que la continuarás, ver su evolución en su rara relación. Como llegó está situación a crearse y donde está InuYasha.
Me gusta este seshomaru, parece saber el valor real de kagome y eso me gusta.

This is such a wonderful beginning! I see it has been years since this was posted, but I truly hope you will come back and finish this intriguing story! I love the uniqueness of your divergence from canon at this early point. I also like your creativity in the Sun Touch. This story has so much incredible potential.

More?

SesshouMaru is a great one. He stole him a woman , well she didn't belong to anyone. Now he's thinking of keeping her. Nice, she will love him later. That half brother was a but anyway!

I love it please continue

I love it

Update soon, please.

This is really wonderful. I would almost beg you to continue it, but I guess, all in due time.

Thank you ever so much for sharing this story with us!

very nice. is this a one shot or are you preparing to continue this story? well done. thanks.

gah. meanie. next chappie please?

Are you going to write more? you totaly should this story is like addicintg lol and its only the first chapter but its hecka good you should write more please!

It is a wonderful, epic chapter.I really loved it, and being a picky chooser, that is not so easy a thing to is my first reveiw to anyone, as the others, even though on my favourites list, did not suite to my appeal, but for ntinue to wirte are truly an expert at it...

Is this just a oneshot?

hmm...i love it and cant wait for more

This is a beautiful story. I can't believe it took me so long to find it!