Reviews for What We Lost
noice chapter 32 . 7/14
nice
George1892 chapter 32 . 7/8
That was a really good fic. I think you kind of skipped out on the societal issues in favour of human drama but you said at the start that is what you would do so that's fair.

I'm also fairly sure you changed Teddy's name to Edmund but then he became Edward again a chapter or two ago.
George1892 chapter 30 . 7/8
If Lucius wants the Malfoy name to live on and Andromeda, the older sister, is popping out kids like nobody's business then why can't Narcissa have one? Andromeda could even introduce her to IVF...
stevem1 chapter 32 . 7/6
This is a wonderful story.
stevem1 chapter 17 . 7/6
This was a good chapter except for the part where those who were tortured being civil to those who tortured. It sounds very humane, very positive and looks good on paper. Some people might even manage it. Most would resort to violence.

This is a great story.
bdwilliams3 chapter 23 . 6/30
I’ve read and reread your stories, this chapter is by far one of the best with the way it displays characters developments and using an outsider (Daphne) POV.
AadenHelan chapter 28 . 6/15
pity
majere4 chapter 32 . 6/12
Oh good Lord, the whole thing, from when you revealed that the younger two were parselmouths onward, just had me laughing, shaking my head and eventually covering my face as I was not alone and my maniacal grin might have scared someone!

I genuinely adore this story. I am enchanted with your characters and the way that they are able to overcome their imperfections, conflicts and the world around them.
Thank you so very much for sharing your time and your talent!
majere4 chapter 31 . 6/12
*shaking my head, laughing bemusedly*
majere4 chapter 30 . 6/12
Another *contentedly happy sigh*
majere4 chapter 29 . 6/12
*rapturously happy sigh*
majere4 chapter 28 . 6/12
Another chapter to favorite, to return to, to study (hopefully when I'm not weeping).
Another chapter that makes me wish I could do more than favor you as an author.
Perhaps you have published original work?
In any case, thank you for sharing this.
majere4 chapter 27 . 6/12
I had wondered if you'd show us one of their (many, given their personalities) fights. That you waited until pregnancy hormones, thoughtless self-endangerment and stubborn denial of any fault combined show that Harry probably avoided most of the previous confrontations.
Excellent job as always, especially weaning in explanations of Pureblood vs 'non' cultural effects as well as the scene with Harry causing Lucy to soil himself
Majerus chapter 26 . 6/11
That was simply beautiful... from start to finish a love note that left me smiling in fond happiness.
Majerus chapter 25 . 6/11
I'm glad you let them 'get together' in their own, special way lol

Huh, well, you gave plenty of hints. At least you didn't try to pretend like Dramoine was even remotely possible. I don't mind such from an AU Draco not Draco beginning, but... yeah.
The fallout from lucy's little diary dilemma is brutal but makes sense given the bastard branded his chattel.

Ended with me laughing aloud, wonderful!
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