Lol. I loved it... Very nicely done and I can picture it clearly. I love the idiot comments... Giggles. Thanks for a great read.

This is so amazing! I love Meliodas's point of view! So many emotions and heartstrings being tugged! :) Good luck on your writing!

This was a precious one-shot! I absolutely loved it and thought the writing was beautifully done. Way to go! Thank you for gifting us with this wonderful read!

This was a fantastic read! So much depth into thoughts, and written so well. You’ve nailed a writing challenge that is very difficult, and you captured Meliodas really well. Great job!

La verdad un muy dulce. Siempre quise saber que pensaba meliodas la primera vez que vio a elizabeth venir al bar. Creo que estaba nervioso y a la vez contento y triste. Contento por volver a verla y triste porque cerca de él era más fácil que recoedara y muriera

This was sweet; I enjoyed it...

I love it ;-)

Be still my heart. OMG! Although I felt that Meliodas was a little bit OOC, I couldn’t get over how sweet this story turned out. Loved it!

I love this!What a cute little one shot very well written! such a great present too x)

This was adorable, you had me smiling the whole way through. You are one of the only authors that I have managed to find that actually writes the sins in character. I am never disappointed when I read one of your stories, and I hope you continue to write one-shots for this series.

Uhm this was the cutest thing I’ve ever read

Gosh this is just too good. I love the way you write meli and eliz, you made them feel so real and so in character.
It got me smiling like an idiot on the subway on my way home :D

Oh this is just so sweet and feels it brings out for these two is amazing! This is so them and it fits to the their characters quite well! Thank you XD

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PFFFFT
MELIODAS IS SUCH A LOVE SICK LITTLE CHILD. BLESS HIS LITTLE DEMONIC HEART.

This is ADORABLE. I love these two cursed goofballs and I think you portrayed them perfectly. This was a great moment to dig into, love it so much.