Aw, that's sad you aren't continuing, I really enjoyed the story so far and would have loved to read the rest.
one thing, if you ever see this review, could you do me a favor and remove this from 'complete', because it really messed me up.
again, I really liked the story, you're an amazing author.

*insert virtual heart here*

Yet another AMAZING addition to this fantabulous story. Dramatic and interesting all the while and it's leaving me ready for more! Can't wait for you to update in August! (pure salt runs through my veins)

This was great, please update!

Pls continue

Aaah they were so close! And AlEX NOOO! I'LL GO AND BEAT UP THAT USELESS SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FOSTER FATHER! I DON'T KNOW HOW TO FIGHT, BUT I'M SURE I CAN LEARN!

Heck, I hate those dreams, where you "wake up" then are jolted back out of it with the knowledge that they're jut a dream. They suck. And yes, I love the Lion King! Never seen the play though. And heck! The note! Alex, are you okay?! *screeches*

Many things to say. 1) I LOVED the abuse scene! Not like I LOVED Alex getting hurt, but I thought the scene was very well written and it kept me on the edge of my seat!
2) I'm so excited for Alex and John to meet. I'm just waiting for it to happen. Hopefully next Chapter!
3) I'm so ready for this LAMS FLUFF
4) Overall such an amazing chapter! You have no idea!
P.S. I can review multiple time if it makes you feel any better c:

You’re doing a really Great job and I think that abuse part was really good also, I cannot wait until the Mysterious boy and John reaction

Yay YOU'RE BACK WITH THIS STORY I'M SO EXCITED YOU HAVE NO IDEA. Also the 3rd person idea was super interesting. My only suggestion is to maybe clarify a little more who's thoughts you're narrating. I got a little confused.

oh trust me im a die hard fan

I honestly love this and please update soon your doing a really good job in the plot

I am speaking for my generation (lmao no im an outcast) when i say that i appreciate this. Theres never enough people writing for entertainment! Also I love how you write the ideas, the emotion. You should give me a lesson some day! You seem like a person i would know in real life but anyway all this to say i appreciate you and the writing your doing.

I'M INTO THIS OMG. Alex's POV seems perfectly fine to me. Of course, I see his character in a different way than you might but I think it's totally suitable.

Stupid universe always ruining people’s lives.
Great chapter btw!