I don't know how did I miss this. I really REALLY enjoyed the thoughts, the convos, and the details/subplots you added to the TV episode. Loved it! This was the episode that led me to FF! Thank you so much for writing this!

Aww... love these stories. Love when the writing is so good i cant help but be sitting there as part of the team. Feeling what they feel. Great job!

And that was freaking awesome

Aw, take Mac home Jack.

Thus was the scene that episode really needed and i thank you so much for sharing. I really enjoyed this story!

I love this chapter so much. I just want to hug it and keep it forever. Well done.

Aww, absolutely loved the entire thing. Loved the escape and dragging Riley in as an unsuspecting accomplice was great. Loved Matty’s reaction, I find I prefer her being nice and understanding and you kept with the theme of the ep as rare as her and Jack are concerned. Great job.
Loved Jack kicking Bozer out and Bozer’s reaction was spot on.
Then there’s all the feels of the guys sitting by the fire pit. Such a great scene. I totally wish we had gotten to see something like this. And I really enjoyed how you brought them back to “normal” with the entire backsies thing which totally made me laugh.
Awesome job, looking forward to whatever you come up with to tag electromagnet. Thanks for posting.
-Gib-

Well, I've got all sorts of warm and fuzzies from this one and it was worth the wait. I love it when the guys get all teary. Mac needed a good cry. And adding the whole "warm beer" scene we were promised in the ep, and never got...priceless! Thank you!
M

Great chapter

"Afterness of a bad day of badness"... that just about sums it up! Thank you so much for giving us our Mac and Jack back. This conversation was perfect and so very needed. You did an awesome job on all these tags-can't wait to see what you come up with next!

This chapter was quite possibly perfect and my favorite of the story. I am so loving your tags and can't wait to see what you do next my friend.

Rid

Aw, so good. Love "taming the savage Bozer." Fantastic, thank you.

Thanks for another great chapter. I really am enjoying the dialogue between Mac and Jack. You right their bromance so well. It’s a treat to read. Thank you!

Awww, poor Mac...medical twice in a day. Glad he's ready to talk. That should be good. Bring on the comfort! Love'in this story!
M

Loved this. Much more real than tonight's episode! Especially liked Mac's thought that Jack's issues with medical were ''more complicated ...". Hmmm. Could be an interesting story there. thanks so much and as always, looking forward to more!