I... am speechless... this is beautiful!

So glorious

It's nice

Yikes!

well she's well and truly pissed off...

I love it. Please I need more

Whoa, nice.

I love this, its very beautiful. The words, the plot the way the dialogue slinks and shimmers, its beautiful.

Shit this is FANTASTIC!

THX
Y

Intense. Love it.

Normally I would never read anything this short, but holy shit did you put me in my place. These approximately 2000 words were truly well written. It felt like reading at least 40.000 words. I truly love how you made Marvels bastardization of Norse Mythology fit in with the real Mythology. For someone who grew up with the tales of the Norse Gods, Marvels iteration has always felt deeply wrong. This story sets the stories right. It explained why Odin doesnt act like Odin, and why Loki isnt Odins blood sworn brother. Now dont get me wrong. I know that Odin was a right old asshole in the original sagas as well, and that Loki was by no means much better either. But they acknowledged it. They knew that their actions werent honorable or the right ones.
Sorry for rambling, but I really just want to thank you. It feels like my homes Mythology has been respected and brought back home by you. So Thank You.

damnnnnn this is gooood~

An interesting skit, but failing somewhat from the complete lack of context and buildup to the scene itself. This seems like a part of a larger story but was cut out and pasted on the wall alone without the framework of the rest of the narrative to support it.

Take your favorite you glorious bastord

This was breathtaking.
Thank you

I love it