Reviews for On the First Page |
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Guest chapter 3 . 4/30/2018 OMG I love this it’s so fricken cute! Yes please, fetus Team Sparia for the win! Both Hanna and Emily were so in character - I could see their teenage selves in their child selves keep going! :) (I know the feeling of gettimg no reviews and it sucks so I hope this helped spark more inspo! :) Xo, Carl |
Flutterbycross chapter 3 . 4/29/2018 I wish grown Hanna had it on lock the way baby Hanna does. She’s totally baby Ali, but with a functioning heart. See, by my calculations, any other twosome story will be half Aria. So you’re saving her awesomeness for the second half. I love the ambiguity at the end. It’s possible Hanna really did fake the screams and crying, all in the name of prizes. But it’s also possible that Hanna didn’t want to lose face in front of Emily so she acted like it was all part of the plan. Great job! I look forward to the next installment. God bless |
Boris Yeltsin chapter 3 . 4/29/2018 Nice one. |
Flutterbycross chapter 2 . 12/2/2017 I love this look at itty-bitty liars. Please continue this, it’s absolutely delightful so far. A young quirky Aria? Yes please. Sparia! Sparia! |
SpearWorks chapter 2 . 9/8/2017 Glad to see this updated! Always refreshing to see the Liars before well, the lies. And killing and blackmailing. Wouldn't mind seeing the smallest one soon! Just think how small and cute Aria would be at this age! |
Thalium chapter 2 . 9/8/2017 I really like this story, I always wanted to know how the girls met ans your version. I'm super impatient to read what you'll do next |
Breyanaxo chapter 2 . 9/7/2017 Great story! Keep up the good work. Can't wait until the next update! |
Momma Duck chapter 2 . 9/6/2017 Tiny spemily is just adorable! Can't wait to read more! :D |
Boris Yeltsin chapter 2 . 9/6/2017 Loved it. |
Da.Skittles chapter 1 . 6/28/2017 This was soooooo adorable! I could just imagine a small toothless Hanna! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2017 I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
SpearWorks chapter 1 . 6/27/2017 Aw, I loved it. I always liked the idea of the girls before A, I'd love to see more chapters with different pairings like this! |
Boris Yeltsin chapter 1 . 6/27/2017 I love this. |
EcoSeeker247 chapter 1 . 6/27/2017 Aww, this was cute! I always wondered how the girls first met as well. I would love to see you do Spencer and Aria next. I love their friendship so much! Keep up the good work! :D |
Momma Duck chapter 1 . 6/26/2017 This is adorable, I love it! Hanna and Emily next? |