Your little tag was amazing. I just watched the episode myself and I'm on a MacGyver high. I knew what the general idea was from Facebook but I kinda wanted a Ghost episode. Could you do a Pre series tag on it?

Poor Riley. I love Matty all the more for stepping in like that. (Also, side note, Matty was AWESOME when she and the black or team stepped in to help cover Mac and Jack's back).

I think you captured Riley's horror of her first kill well

I absolutely adored everything about the finale but I definitely found myself wishing they weren't confined to the usual 40ish minutes, especially when it came to the more emotional/character driven aspects of the episode and the beginning bit about Cairo. Even though everyone did a fantastic job with the time frame they had to tell the story, I still felt like I needed a bit extra. So thank you for writing this up. It's a wonderful companion piece to the episode.

I really enjoyed this...I think you expanded on how Riley could be coping very well...loved the moments between her and jack..

Bravo! I haven't had a chance to see the finale yet but thanks to you I'm trembling with excitement. Can't wait. I think you did Riley perfectly. I would be over the top in shock as well!

Would love if you could write Thornton back in. Go for it!

LOVED THIS. It was the amazing Riley-emotional-fallout fic we needed.

I think the same as you, last night's series I miss the hug, the look "here I am" "everything is fine" on the part of Jack to Riley that parental love has to be, I do not know why they do not write it. I loved your story.

Nicely done. :)

I loved the finale. I could go on about all the stuff I liked about it, but that would take too long. I'll say, though, that I'm glad we finally got to see more of the inside of the Phoenix Foundation. Before it just seemed like we only saw the war room or later, the labs.

As for this tag, it was really great seeing Riley trying to deal with what happened. I think it was a good in character reaction.

Hoping people will do more missing scenes/tags for the season finale, though I suspect if it happens, it'll not necessarily be this weekend, with it being Easter weekend and all.

You did an excellent job with Riley, with everybody for that matter. And Jack's hug... awesome!
I absolutely love the father/daughter stuff with those two. Even though they seem to have worked things out, Riley's jabbs at Jack get kind of irritating. I was happy to see the way she reacted to the shooting, it made her a bit more human, rather than the badass persona she's kind of had. Especially for someone that's only been a spy for 8 months. This was a great tag, Awesome Job! I look forward to the 'somethin' somethin', thanks for posting.
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Wow. You filled in all those little holes so beautifully! I wish we had seen all of this on screen. You wrote Riley perfectly, with an absolutely justifiable reaction. Of course she would have been totally shaken and lost. Loved how each character met her where she was at and gave her the comfort she needed in their own way. and I loved Jack's hug and how he knew she needed to fall apart so the healing could begin. Ahhhh...such a great tag! Thanks so much for sharing!

This, like all of your stories, is incredible

Love your tag, and love how much detail you put in it. From Mac being with Riley at the hospital, to Matty coming in to be with her - perfect. And it felt so right to have Jack come to check on her, and to be the one to give her a hug. You did a great job sharing Riley's perspective of the ordeal. I didn't think you wrote her too weepy - killing people isn't her job, and it seems very appropriate it would freak her out. I thought you struck the right balance with the tears. It was a great episode, and it'll be tough waiting until the fall for new shows. So in the meantime, just keep writing! That will get us through the hiatus.

Lol. I really liked your take on Riley, and Jack being there for her; even Matty's part. Those events have long time effects. Too bad it wasntn't a two hour episode and I too wanted some Thornton closure.

Love, love, love this! Great job. I think you got the emotions perfect in every one. The finale was fricking awesome!