I like it !

Sweet time of remembering lost loved one.

This was beautiful. You vividly described the void that is left when a loved one is gone. It never does go away. They are so blessed to have each other. Your writing painted a lovely picture of their close knit family. Thank you for going there and giving us all a deeper understanding of these guys. Well done!

This was amazing!

Feels weird saying I enjoyed reading something so sorrowful, but this was a beautiful piece. Thank you for posting.
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Very sad. Very real!

Ahhh! *wipes tears* no not crying, anyway write soon!

Beautifully poignant words well expressed. Thank you.

What a sweet aspect to explore with these characters. Having each other for support is perfect. Thanks for writing.

I know what you mean. I lost my father at a young age, so this hits home (but in a good way, if that makes sense). Now that I'm about to get married, I think of him even more. I'm not saying this to make you sad or anything, just that your story is beautiful.

I think my favorite is Riley though. That last part about Jack being like her father at the funeral was a thing to behold/read.

Omg this is so sad but amazing

Awe. This is so cute. Not in a "yay. People died" thing, but, like, it gave the characters emotions and it made them seem real. It connected with the actual motions real people go through and I really like that. I especially like Bozer's part. I know what it feels like to lose someone you never really knew but you still loved with all you got. This was great. I loved this. Keep up the great work!

Aaaaawwwww sad day!