| Reviews for Holly Potter and the Heart of Canis |
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   NabikiB chapter 2 . 10/26/2019 Please tell me you're going to let an annoyed Holly slip Ben some Everyflavors... |
| Maryna chapter 5 . 9/23/2019 Plz continue u are doing great. Excellent story! Absolutely love it so far |
| Blackshadow chapter 5 . 9/15/2019 I really like this story. I don't find a lot of fictions with Mercy Thompson and I love yours. |
| DukeBrymin chapter 5 . 6/2/2019 I like your characterization. They each have a pretty good voice, and that’s important. My only criticism is that you keep switching between past tense and present tense, and that throws off your rhythm. Looking forward to more! |
| jasonjkay chapter 5 . 11/26/2018 It's an interesting story, Love the way you've written Luna in this chapter. I Dont know the Mercy Thompson series but im guessing the future threat in from that? Hopefully it's good and Holly makes a difference. |
| Almadynis Rayne chapter 5 . 9/12/2018 Whoo! Starting to wonder when Mary Jo will be introduced into the story, but definitely looking forward to it! |
| Alkeniw Andilite chapter 5 . 9/11/2018 So I know nothing about the Mercy Thompson series, is Jerry the Mary Jo Holly is listed as paired with? Or is Jerry a stepping stone? Also, love this story already. I really like how Holly seems extremely powerful, always love unstoppable main characters. Please hurry with your stories! |
| dogman999 chapter 5 . 9/8/2018 Love the story so far keep up the good work. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/8/2018 Another great chapter and the entry of one of my favourite characters, love luna :) but I wonder what she is sad about and a pity they never got together they would be great together and both deserve some happiness in their lives and catch a break. Can't wait to see where you take this keep up the good work. |
| Edsheerancamogie chapter 5 . 9/7/2018 I absolutely love the new chapter you have an excellent way with words that's grasps the reader into the world you have created which I experienced and loved very much looking forward to the next work until ten I shall enjoy the work you already produced Keep up the brill work and thanks ️️ |
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/5/2018 The tattoo is going to hurt like an S.O.B. most likely; I look forward to reading more |
| Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 5 . 9/5/2018 Loved that Luna showed up |
| Maryna chapter 5 . 9/4/2018 Great job! Is this a slow burn towards Mary Jo and Holly Potter? If so great work bringing it to fruitation! Cant wait to read more |
| Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 4 . 9/4/2018 Nice first date |
| sandipi chapter 5 . 9/4/2018 Thank you for the new chapter. I love Luna and am glad she visited. I wish she was gay too but that would make it harder to bring in more people. |
