Yes, better the the actual scene.

This is really good, I've been looking for a fanfiction like this for a while and I've really enjoyed reading this. This should have happened in the show, it would have added so much more tension :D

Perfect!
I found it a bit odd how fast Sherlock managed well after the suffocation in the Episode, this here felt quite better!

oh boy that was damn I like this version gods made me cry

This was stunning. Absolutely STUNNING. And a brilliant character study of one John H. Watson, M.D., to boot.

Thank you for writing/posting this.

Good job! Glad you're still writing...!

Well, that was a close call. Whew. You had me worried for a moment. :)

Great stuff! As a doc who has worked many codes, I think you got the level of tension just right!

Wonderful work! Thank you for writing this story. I have been looking forward to reading one like this.

I don't watch this show, but love your stories, Wuchel1. I hope you gift us irrelevants with another POI story. The series may be done but POI lives on here at Fanfic.

oh my God I love it! I love John being BAMF life that! you are awesome, thank you for writing this!

on one hand if the episode had played out like this it would have added suspense and meaning, but on the other hand I would probably have suffered even more of a heart attack watching it xD

no matter, this is a great story, well done!

Great story! I really enjoyed reading this. I wish it had played out like that in the The Lying Detective episode it should have that way it would have been more exciting that way.I found it kind of boring the way it ended this series up.I hope you will write more Sherlock fanfiction and soon. :)

Great story ! And great description of a CPR, I'm pretty sure you're a caregiver !

Well done. It felt like I was watching the scene.